Thanks for a great little story.
Title: Fever
| 29 Mar 2012 2:50 am
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Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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Hah. I really like the voice you've used here. I hate first-person POV in fan fic as a rule, and I usually flat-out refuse to read them. But the short, staccato style of his thoughts worked well to keep me interested. Well done.
Aww, that was cute. I'm looking forward to the one from Snape's POV. :-)
Oh that was a hoot! I loved Harry's POV and you did his confusion wonderfully well. I hope you write the second chapter from Snape's POV.
Tracy
I like this fic very much with Snape taking care of Harry! Write another one?? :-)
Awww, nice one-shot! I really enjoyed it. Poor Harry. Sick fics are great. Thanks for sharing!
You had a couple of typos you may want to fix:
Man, I hoped Snape had the ability to keep him mouth shut... his
I think there's more but I can't remmeber them.
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