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Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 17 Jun 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Positively loved this chapter. I still play 'Never have I ever..' sometimes. LOL.

    I have a difficult time believing that Snape will let Harry off, even if he knows that Worty really did it. But then again, I think it will be interesting to see if Harry can even bring himself to lie to Snape after all they've been through. He's got to develop the respect sometime... I could see Harry stumbling around his lie and then giving himself up, inevitably begging Snape to go easy on Worty. I can't wait to see how this turns out. However you write it, it'll be brilliant and enjoyable.

    As for the slash opinion, I vote no. This is one of the only stories where I can stomach Draco, and I think it has a lot to do with his and Harry's relationship--they're like brothers. Making it a slash fic would completely change it, and I think you'd lose a lot of readers, unfortunately.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you and everyone else who has weighed in one this matter. Most of the urges I got for slash were from fanfic.net, but to be honestly, Potions and Snitches was the first place I even posted my writing and I agree with everything you have said in this matter. Therefore, this story will remain Gen and I will have to tell the other people to read something else.

    I appreciate the feedback and will start writing soon.

    Perry

Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 17 Jun 2008 1:38 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe harry's so innocently cute in this story.. don't you want to ask Snape about tongues.. hahahaha!
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 17 Jun 2008 10:43 am
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    I've love this story from the first chapter of TAPtoGrow to this chapter I love the father/son rel between Sev and Harry, the brotherly rel between Draco and Harry and i see Worty falling into this category and the friendship that is growing with the Golden Trio and with Draco added. I think it will be a mistake to bring in slash (the little romance between Ron and Hermoine is enough and let it be kept to a minimum nothing graphic please) you could talk about normal teenage fears and feelings, possibly a crush or so but to bring in Slash would really spoil the whole tone of this story (esp if you were thinking Harry and Draco - if you want to do that then write another story)
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 17 Jun 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: James Deconly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Honestly, you've got a great peice of work, I have to hand it to you. I am personaly both curious and terrified at what Snape will have in store for our Harry.
    On the issue of Slash, it is, I feel, completely random. Truthfully, I was begining to view Draco as an older brother to Harry, to protect him from doing stupid things where Harry is alas at a loss to protect himself [for the sake of others] Other's first seems to be the Griffy theme but Draco's in slytherin and well he knows when to save his own hide. [especially from Snape ;)]
    I think we should see more Harry becoming infatuated, I think the Harry/Ginny ship should be introduced in a way that it's really just a crush nothing too, well off the hook especially for a fic like this one!

    Thanks for being an amazing writer P!
    JD
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 17 Jun 2008 12:31 am
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay!!!
    You finally updated
    okay, where does this whole slash thing come in? I mean who is slashing?
    Personally I think you should keep slash out of this story
    Thanks
    Kel
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 16 Jun 2008 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think that you should make this a slash story. What I love about the story is the in depth variety of Gen pairings: Harry and Snape, and Snape and Draco, and maybe Harry and Worty, and Worty and Snape, and Harry and Draco... I just love Gen! This story seriously delivers, and it's what I like about it. I would not like the story as much if we had to muddle through mushy things. Ugh. Don't waste time with that extra stuff! :P Harry, or whoever, doesn't need a boyfriend. I might not even like it if he had a girlfriend, if it took up scenes where Worty could be having tea with his soon-to-be adopted family (I hope!). I think that romance in these types of stories are only good as plot devices to get more Gen relationships and situations between the characters already there. Please don't change the dynamic! I will cry. And pout. And then read your other stories. :P
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 16 Jun 2008 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You wrote a note in the summary of this chapter asking for opinions on slash, so I thought I would share my views on the matter…

    Personally, I don't think you should make this a slash story. For one thing, you haven't warned us of it until now and it would be really disappointing for those of us who are big fans of this story but are uncomfortable with same-sex pairings.

    Secondly, I'm assuming when you mention slash you're referring to the Harry/Draco pairing (please correct me if I’m wrong). We know both of these characters are straight, so I don't think it would be in character for them to be together. Not that it can't be done in some stories, but it requires a lot of development with both characters as well as a lot of explanation and careful planning. That's not really the focus of this story and I would hate for you to move it in such a different direction since you've even shown yourself that Harry is interested in girls (during the conversation with Snape in chapter four).

    Thirdly, I don't think it's what you want to do. You say you might add slash because some people are for it - but is it what you want? Taking suggestions from readers is one thing, but changing major details just for the sake of pleasing people is another. I don't think you've planned on having slash, and unless you feel it necessary, I am strongly for leaving it out.

    But it's your story and I really think you should take it in the direction you want to go. Please don't compromise your plans just to please any one of us readers. I just wanted to give my opinion on the matter since you asked. Good luck with your decision. =)
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 16 Jun 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: GoLd (Signed) [Report This]
    LOve it! Please post ASAP! Also can Snape knows he is lying?
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 16 Jun 2008 1:57 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and a great game that was played at the pic-nic, that game sounds like fun, not really into the romance stuff, not into slushy things, harry is going to be in real trouble with snape
Title: Chapter 13 - Picnic 16 Jun 2008 12:41 pm
Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, Harry's so sweet. Sweet but a little bit silly. Snape will totally cream him and then tell him, "by the way son, I knew you didnt do it all along" while Harry is crying and nursing a very sore behind.
    At least that's what I think will happen.
    Poor kid.
    I like the comedy bit about the basket getting too light and almost floating away as well as the part about Harry admitting to Draco that he thought he would have a girlfriend first. But I am a little confused there because isnt he counting Cho?
    Update soon!

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