I loved this. The fake, weak cough Harry gave when Snape was glaring at him was hilarious. And I was actually proud of Snape and his growing patience with Harry... Sure, he yelled right back at him, but I think in a situation like this, it was exactly what Harry needed. It seemed to quiet him right down--being told that he acted like a seven-year-old sometimes, without regard for his safety. I do like how Harry told Snape that he actually thought this one through, though. I think it's important for Snape to acknowledge that, even if Harry's attempts don't always work out. At least he's trying...
You've really done a lovely job of building up the plot in this sequel. I can't wait for future chapters when Snape tries to actually teach Harry--should be interesting ;) Great job!
Yay! This is so good! I love it! Thanks for the new chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Faking
| 23 Feb 2008 2:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Stella (Anonymous)
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Hi!
I'm your italian translatress!
I want to tell you that I love this sequel! Severus is so sweet and cute, I love to see him worried about Harry.
I like to see them both so close.
another great chapter and harry avoided going with the horrible potions teacher, i still think she has connections with mouldywarts, snape is still so worried about harry, even running to the hospital wing to check him was so sweet and nice of him
Lol! I've never played sick before but after seeing Harry do it, well it sounds like fun! Perfect Snape, yeah.... right, no wonder Severus laughed! I like that Harry & Dracoo are getting along well. Or at least so far, wonder what Ron and Hermione are going to say about it! OoO! I think Snape would be pleased, Ron though...not so much. Great chapter! I look forward to more!
Scorpia
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 20 Feb 2008 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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Please please update. Pretty please!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 20 Feb 2008 1:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Lola (Anonymous)
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Sitting here reading, very great fanfic. I LOVE your Dumbledore in the previous chapters. Except when he said " Snape" instead of Professor Snape, that through him off a little in my opinion. Speaking of Snape. I love your Severus as well, he's very good.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 11 Feb 2008 4:49 am
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Still curious as hell about Moretta! And now that I've said, that, I'll go back and work my way forward! LOL! Love the fight between Harry and Draco obviously more than Snape did! I really have enjoyed Draco's character and the odd friendship that he and Harry have. Speaking of friendship, Ron and Hermione are absolutely perfect! Their reactions to finding out Harry is spanked are completely believable!
What more can I say other than you continue to amaze and astonish!
Tracy
this fic is getting better and better, i do not like the new potions teacher, she's creepy, she could give voldemort a run for his money, thats if he has any!, is she a death eater?, she's creepy enough to be one
Oh no! Not that crazy b***h again! I hate that Moretta woman, she's just..gluck, lol. I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I love reading this story it's very entertainig and interesting. When Harry was fighting with Malfoy I laughed at Harry's teasing ^_^ I don't like Draco at all but I had to laugh at some of his comments. As for Ron and Hermione's reactions, I think Hermione is overreacting and that Ron has a point for one, lol. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
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