I can't believe Harry actually told them about the spankings. I honestly didn't think that he would - ever.
Really enjoyed the scene with Draco & Harry outside having fun together. Good job.
So, I've been thinking - isn't it sad that as much as Harry hates his punishments (of course) he almost needs them as a reminder that someone actually cares enough about him to chastise him? Eventually I'm sure that he'll grow out of it, but for right now it's almost as though he needs it to be happy.
Such a sad, sad way for a boy to be.
Why do I suspect that Worty's parents are eithe in prison with Lucius or at St Mungo's with the Longbottoms? There's lots more to that story isn't there?
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 21 Jan 2008 9:53 am
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| Reviewer: lily (Anonymous)
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Wow, I should demand updates more often! Thanks for another great chapter. I like how you make Draco and Harry get along without them really realizing and the fighting is also brotherly. I like when you say Harry put on his best angelic face. And the end with Hermione and Ron questioning Harry about the spanking. He must have wanted to melt. Great chatper.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 21 Jan 2008 5:57 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Haha, Ron and Hermione are just so amusing. I rather liked the scenes between Draco and Harry, even if it's different in the sort-of-getting-along kind. It was entertaining, and i could see it happening in this universe. good chapter!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 21 Jan 2008 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Whoa! It was quite nice chapter and I really, really loved Hermione's accidental magic. Bed on fire! -hehe- All in all, it was a nice chapter, depspite few mistakes.
AGH! A cliffhanger!!! I think it's interesting how you foiled the reactions of Hermione and Ron against each other...I though Hermione would act like it was good for him. But this chapter was really pleasing, thanks.
Oh , wow, I'm so happy! I squealed and did a little happy dance when I saw you had updated this story.
I love Ron and Hermione arguing, they're so funny. But yeah, if I was Harry, I would have blurted that out too, just to get them to stop.
Someone needs to tell Hermione that spanking is not abuse. There is a fine line, but Snape is defenitly staying on the right side of it. It would be so cute, if Hermione kept bugging Harry about it, and finally, he gets tired of it, and launches into a speech about how Snape does not hit him, and how Snape is so much better than the Dursleys, and how he feels really safe with Snape. It would be even better if Snape heard him.
But, that's just my ideas. Anything you do will be marvelous. Your ATaPtG was the first Harry Potter fanfic I read, and it's still one of my favorites.
Thanks so much for the update!
-Elise
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 20 Jan 2008 9:48 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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The high spirited fighting between Draco and Harry and Ron and Hermoine was well done and added much humour to the story. Enjoyed it very much.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 20 Jan 2008 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: Azalea (Signed)
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wow! that chapter was sooo funny! i love how harry and draco treat each other! and i love it when harry is cheeky!
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