| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Nov 2009 12:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Mila (Anonymous)
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Oh, I really like it so far!!! Are you going to continue? (Please!!!) Very interesting subject. It looks like you're the only one who responded to this challenge...
I like this story - well written and with no mistakes I can see, it's really drawn me into a world where Harry is just as impressive a bastard as his predecessor was! I do hope that you get round to updating this again - I'd love to know what happens next!
Are you going to carry on with this story? I think it is an intersting idea and I want to know what it is that Harry is researching and what has turned him into someone even snarkier than Snape. You have a good writing technique and it was a pleasure to read something free of spelling and grammar errors that flowed well.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Apr 2008 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous)
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I really like this start. It's a better start then most stories. I would really like to read more. Your story promises to be most interesting. ^.^
| Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Mar 2008 8:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous)
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Yo,
This is really good...
The only problem it that it is no... how do I say this...
NOT FINISHED!!!!!!!!!
^.^ Thank you for your time.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Feb 2008 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Tim (Anonymous)
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Very promising, a pity you don't seem to continue the story. I hope, you are writing something somewhere, because I think your writing-skills are excellent.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 23 Jan 2008 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous)
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I like this story. Please be nice and write more. Please.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Jan 2008 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: Seth Cienesty (Anonymous)
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This story is surprisingly good. I would really, really, REALLY like to read more please.
Wow, poor kid. Harry is MEAN! But that is to be expected. :) It's like a complete changing of roles, only Harry doesn't have a reason to hate Snape, except for catching him looking for/using the Dark Arts book. i think that he needs more thoughts throughout the chapter about how he feels about the kid, such as how he's dark, and dark things were used for torturing/killing, ect. Harry seems a little blank without the background thoughts of WHY he thinks things of the boy.
I wonder if the boy DOES need the Dark Arts book for a good reason though. like, perhaps a paternity potion? Or something to heal his ailing caretaker?
This was a great start. Are you going to update it? I hope so. I'm very interested in reading more, and seeing where this will travel. :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Aug 2007 5:22 am
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| Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous)
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I hope you continue this I really like what youve go so far!
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