You are a mean, mean person and had better update soon. *drums fingers on desk, waiting for the story alert*
Wow. You could really feel Snape's pain adding up over the years and he sounded so depressed. I'm glad Dumbledore was there to save him though. Hopefully you wont wait too long to add the next chapter!
Oh my goodness. That was one heart wrenching chapter. I'm at a loss for words. Waiting for help, waiting for happiness to come to Snape in some way. I hope.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Jul 2007 10:41 am
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide Cheque (Anonymous)
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I really liked that first chapter. Great story so far! I love your version of Snape...he's so...world weary. And after what he's gone through he would be. Good stuff!
Awesome! They made it. The train rides were great soul searching times and I really enjoyed the interactions between the characters.
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Very well thought out chapter. Great conversations and scenes. I enjoyed it and hope for another one soon.
Nice chapter! Good to see that they made it home.
You have a very clever and impressive way of delivering background info without it being dull.
Also, I think that the "from a Slytherin perspective" part is brilliant. I've always thought that the last-minute-points in SS was a little cruel.
Awesome chapter!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 07 Jul 2007 7:21 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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OMG!!! Evil Black!!! Poor Sev!!!!! Hope you update soon!!!!
I am really on the "Black is evil" bandwagon right now. I've never been overly fond of him but this Black needs to fall off the train.
Thanks for the update. :)
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