Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Malfoy Manor 01 Jul 2007 5:19 am
Reviewer: Gryffynsfyre (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where you plan on taking it.

    Not to be overly critical, however you've misspelled dilema in the first couple of chapters. You have it spelled as delima.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for you feed-back! I appreciate it greatly~ I have now fixed the spelling errors! 

Title: Through the Looking Glass 30 Jun 2007 1:52 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was funny! I loved that ending.
Title: My Savior? 30 Jun 2007 1:49 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cool way to get Snape to Harry! I loved it! Good story so far. I love that you have lots of chapters up right off the bat.
Title: Seeing is Believing 29 Jun 2007 10:53 pm
Reviewer: elsolel (Signed) [Report This]
    oooo. Exciting. I hope he's ok. eagerly awaiting the next installment!
Title: My Savior? 29 Jun 2007 10:39 pm
Reviewer: elsolel (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Safe.
Title: Plans for Harry 29 Jun 2007 10:32 pm
Reviewer: elsolel (Signed) [Report This]
    Anything Vernon arranges CAN'T be good for Harry!
Title: Seeing is Believing 29 Jun 2007 10:08 pm
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed) [Report This]
    For your first fanfiction it's not bad, but it is a little hard to follow at times and kinda rushed. I do recommend that you get a beta to go over it as you do have alot of mistakes, and if that was Dumbledore's pheonix in the earlier chapter then it is Fawkes not Faux.

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