I like how you are not having Harry recover quickly from what he's been through. I have read stories where it's as though the writer is saying "hey, it's been a few days, he's dealt with it and is over it now."
Good job showing the stalled momentum and fallbacks in his recovery.
What an interesting therapy session. At least Snape has him talking - that's a good thing.
Really liked the closing line "Very well. But finish the tea first if you would."
| Title: Chapter 43
| 30 Jan 2008 7:23 pm
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| Reviewer: DC Lady (Anonymous)
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Amazing story! You had me enthralled from beginning to end. I can wait to read the next story.
Paula (dcladyfiction@yahoo.com)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Dec 2007 6:03 am
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| Reviewer: Gershwhen@sbcglobal.net (Anonymous)
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Nice start to this story.
As a note, RAPE does NOT equal slash. Your warning, "Slash relationship mentioned: rape Harry Potter/adult" is misleading. Slash relationships are mostly loving, gay relationships between 2 male character, not assault and torture.
You know, as much as I love your story - and I most certainly do - I think I am most entertained by your very amusing author's notes. Great job.
| Title: Chapter 43
| 30 Nov 2007 3:56 am
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| Reviewer: ladywatts (Anonymous)
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This was an awesome story.I started reading and couldn't stop. Thanks for sharing.
Nice story here! It's really sweet, though a tad angsty here and there... Well done!
| Title: Chapter 43
| 17 Nov 2007 6:10 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I was so sad when I saw it was the end, that I had to wait a while to read it. I just did, and it was wonderful. All I can say, is very well done! And, that I hope the sequel is soon to come? Excellent fic, it reminds me somewhat of another couple that are considered truly classics, only in that the charachters are so well-depicted, and the scenarios are so believable - your story line is refreshingly creatively unique. Thank you for a wonderful story!
I love this story so much!!! I cant wait for the sequel. I hope Draco will be in it. Either way I know I'll love it!
| Title: Chapter 43
| 13 Nov 2007 10:18 pm
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| Reviewer: snapes lover (Anonymous)
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oh please write a sequel!
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