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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    I get completely undone by silly little things like Severus saying that Harry "is in *his* room" and "in *our* home". It's probably extremely sentimental but nevertheless, I can't get enough.

    Aah Ron, he is an interesting character. It's nice here that his motives are very clearly aimed at protecting Harry, and he obviously still sees Severus as a threat. I can't wait to see Hermione's response; a dropped tea cup eh...

    Haha made me think of earlier chapters where Harry was quite interested in hurling tea cups at the walls and Severus asking him to first drink his tea if he must react that way.

    So I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck with it!
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 11:35 am
Reviewer: terri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice ending.... I've been enjoying the whole; you do good work. Angst plus humor; you have good voices for Harry and Severus.
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 9:44 am
Reviewer: tetsubinatu (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story a lot. Thanks!

    How about playing on the 'light'vs'shadow theme in your next title. Of course I don't know what sort of things happen in it, but maybe something like'On the edge of Light' or 'Face the Light'?

    Titles aren't really my thing either, though, I admit! Which is why one of my stories is called 'Essential Qualities in a Sperm Donor'. I figured that at the very least, it would be unique! *g*
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 9:18 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hooray for sequels! XD
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 8:18 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, I could just hear that teacup crashing to the floor! I wanted to smack Ron for being so rude yet understand it at the same time.

    Loved Harry's dialog in his journal. And how poorly Snape's conversation is going with Hermione and Ron. Poor Snape!

    Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 4:06 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! i love it so much!
Title: Chapter 41 17 Oct 2007 12:40 am
Reviewer: dragonclaw74 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok, did you just update this today and the site just isn't registering it as a recent update cause if I'm reading the site right, this chapter was added on the 10th. How did I miss it, and for that matter how did everyone else miss it. There aren't any reviews for goodness sake. Anyway, another wonderful chapter as always. I can't wait for their response to Snape being Harry's guardian.

    Author's Response: Hi Dragonclaw,  No, I updated it on Sunday evening, but the site had a glitch, and I wasn't even sure it posted, and I wasn't able to log on at all yesterday to check.  Haven't had time today before now.  I'll try and get the update date changed, as notices won't go out for those who have the story listed as a favorite otherwise.  And thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 40 12 Oct 2007 12:58 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This may be my favorite chapter yet! I adore all the interaction between Severus and Harry!

    Severus really is a wonderful guardian--Harry needs somebody who's overprotective. To be honest, I think in Harry's case, there's no such thing as being overprotective. I mean, Voldemort has Harry in his sights, and Harry is in great danger because of that. I have no doubts that Harry will be the victor in their ultimate confrontation, though.

    It's just wondeful to see how far Harry and Severus have come, both in recovering from the horrific traumatic events earlier, and in their relationship with one another. And Severus admitted to himself that he 'liked' Harry. Guess he's not quite ready to call it 'love', but we know better.

    I'm sad to think of this story ending, but I can't wait for the sequel.
Title: Chapter 40 11 Oct 2007 10:43 pm
Reviewer: cbw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi

    i've only just found this and read it through today. its a really brilliant story. Can't wait to see how it develops.
Title: Chapter 40 11 Oct 2007 6:32 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. My favorite part was when Snape observed sleepy Harry and wondered if Harry would ever really relax in his sleep. I love mentions of little things like that.

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