Sweeeeeeeeet. I have popcorn you know, this is better than a movie. Can hardly wait for more. Does you talent know no bounds, kiddo? Love it. Thansk
What a delightful chapter! Thank you.
thank you so much for writting so well and so fast ! you're my hero !
I especailly loved this chapter! There were so many things that made it soo good. Like the beginning when Harry analyzed Snape's facial expressions and Snape's comment about world peace was very amusing. That man certainly has an interesting sense of humor. Keep up the most excellent writing!
I'm pretty sure that clusterf*** is the funniest word I've heard in a LONG time. I'm sirius.
And good God, this was an awesome chapter. There are too many brilliant aspects of it to list, but hmmm..I'll mention a couple: The many faces of S. Snape; Snape's rage directed at Dumbledore; Harry and Snape's curt back-and-forth conversation about trashing Dumbledore's office. And, well, this story has some of the best subtle humor I think I've ever read.
*hands you some oreos*
That was sweet. And I loved the name he called the Headmaster and the thought that he should add it to their chart. hehee that was funny.
Wow. This is great stuff. Can hardly wait for more..... Thanks
| Title: Chapter 23
| 26 Aug 2007 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous)
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You are awesome and I love you . I mean, it really is amazing how you've got all these fics going at once and yet not only do you update them frequently but you also manage to make them satisfying and well written. For both this one and the Slytherin!Harry one, in plot they're like ones I've seen before, but I would think, "That's a really good story idea, but the writing style is holding it back. How great would it have been with someone who could really *write*?" And now here you are :). So thanks!
*Shakes Harry* I just want him to SEE what he's missing. The whole picture is RIGHT THERE and he can't see past the immediate present. Gah. Lol. You're really good at getting us all riled up. I like that there doesn't hardly ever seem to be a moment of peace, though I do think it'd be nice to see Harry smile and laugh and even perk up just a little. I can't wait for the day he does. Lol.
Great use of canon, and I loved how Severus used legilimency to help Harry. Seeing the things that had hurt him in the past now being put in service to help should help some wounds to begin to heal. And now Harry has to deal with the secrets he has kept.
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