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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 1 25 Aug 2007 6:49 pm
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great building on the Snape and Harry mentor relationship. Nice that getting over the rape takes time.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 9:54 am
Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Gods, I'm crying (well my version of a cry), I've hardly ever cried for a story. It was so sweet though. I like it better than A Year Like None Other if you've read it and how Harry reacts to the torture. I like your version better of his struggles. The diary is neat too and I can really see how you plan to show his progress.

    I hope you don't kill off Snape 'cuz (would that be a banned word?)I saw mentions of DH. I don't think I would be able to handle anymore tear jerking emotions.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 7:00 am
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No, you make OUR day. :D
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 6:46 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! That was a good chapter, I liked Harry's reaction. Are you tying in some Deathly Hallows stuff in here or was this stuff you had already imagined for your story? Poor Harry, he needs a guardian soon!
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 6:10 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's childhood really, really sucked. :-(

    Ah, the Prophecy again. Interesting that Snape still doesn't know the whole thing.

    Author's Response:

    Re: the prophecy, I figured that whatever Snape doesn't know, Voldie can't yank out of his head.  Snape's a really good Occlumens, but he's not perfect. . . .  Thanks for your reviews!

Title: Chapter 22 25 Aug 2007 5:59 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, all I can say is, I'm glad there's another chapter up already, because that's one evil cliffhanger!

    :-)
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 5:15 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for not holding out too long on us! Great chapter and looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 5:12 am
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! ^_^ you light up my life and save me from horrible resume writing! Can't wait to read more, wonderful as always

    Skittles and all that jazz
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 4:27 am
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    More, more, more! (Please?)
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 2:59 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. A smallish canon quibble. In this chapter Snape says that the Marauders toned down their attacks after the werewolf Prank. That's certainly what many readers assumed prior to DH. However, in DH JKR showed that the werewolf Prank happened *before* Snape's Worst Memory, meaning that as far as we can tell James, Sirius and the others didn't learn anything from the Prank and continued to bully Snape "because he exists," and continued to lack any circumspection over Lupin's being a werewolf.

    Your having Snape tell Harry about the prophecy and Lily was very interesting. At this point, Snape is far past the misconceptions of canon Snape and I *can* see him doing this. And Harry's reaction was very believable.

    So will Harry tell Snape the rest of the prophecy? I could see him doing it to "test" Snape, assuming as he says at the end of the chapter that Snape won't want him after that.

    Author's Response: Gah!  You're right about the messed up Snape chronology.  The timeline I was referencing hasn't been updated for DH yet.  Blech.  Okay, I'll clear it up in rewrites.  :-)  And yes, it's likley Harry will tell him the rest of the prophecy, if only to test him, as you say.  Thanks!

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