For some reason, Lily doesn't seem like a very good mother. Leaving someone else to take care of her own son and all that. But admittedly I love Harry and Snape's interactions with each other. It's clear that as much as Severus feels like throttling Harry, he loves him just as much. Loving it so far!
Oh, I wonder what that's all about! This is a great start!
| Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 09 Apr 2012 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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Loved this story! So sad you've abandoned it!
| Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 17 Jun 2009 9:17 am
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| Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 13 Aug 2008 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Aww very cute. I love the way you have Severus's childhood play so much into the way he treats Harry and the way he wants to be a favor. I hope we'll get to see Harry looking out for his younger sister some day! This is a really adorable story- I love the way you haven't made them so golden family where everyone is perfect and happy all the time! Good work!
| Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 13 Jun 2008 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed)
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loved the story.... update
CHICKEN......give the chicken a bottle and put the baby in the oven at 450 degrees.
i dont like Lily.... she seems mean..... i guess this story is abandoned
| Title: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter!
| 17 Apr 2008 10:09 am
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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Aww! I love little Harry. He's so adorable and your part about his insecurities about the baby is totally true. Kids totally react that way when a new baby comes. Poor little kid.
| Title: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 17 Apr 2008 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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I love your story. I just started reading and I just could not stop. I love the end when Harry smacked Snape and the line that followed. “Respect your elders, Daddy! Don’t be so naughty!” Little Harry is positively adorable!
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