| Title: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 13 Apr 2011 5:14 am
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| Reviewer: Axelle (Anonymous)
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I love this.Any chance you will make it a longer story and expand more in harry's life as harry snape?
| Title: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 03 Jun 2009 2:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 4: What Could Have Been - Part Three
| 10 May 2009 10:23 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm glad that he's still going to be friends with Ron and Hermione.
I'm really curious now to what's going to happen. Are all thre past events going to occur. I guess not now that the past has been changed.
| Title: Chapter 3: What Could Have Been: Part Two
| 10 May 2009 10:12 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Harry is really powerful in this. That must be difficult for a young child to handle. Thank goodness, he's got Snape to teach him to control it.
| Title: Chapter 2: What Could Have Been - Part One
| 10 May 2009 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Harry friends and even considering him his brother? Sirius and Snape friends? MUST be an alternate universe.
It would be so nice for Harry to have a loving family, wouldn't it? Even if it IS Snape!
| Title: Chapter 1: What Has Been
| 10 May 2009 10:00 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Ooh, interesting. Very unique.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Snape Harry 's father. Yikes.
That was cute, though I'm a bit surprised Ginny downed the potion without knowing what it was. If you ever choose to do scenes again, I'd love to see when Severus first sees Harry as a baby or when he takes Harry from Dumbledore after Lily and James are killed. Great work!
-P.G.
Great story, but I feel like it's a bit rushed. Normally I don't leave so many critiques, but I really think that with some plot changes, this story could be really good. We didn't really get to see Harry come to terms with his new life, which was what I was really hoping for.
I do like how Harry sees visions of his previous life and is disturbed by them. Very creative!
-P.G.
I really do like this, though I'm a bit worried about the change because it might be hard for Harry to accept the different way that Snape will treat him.
Great story!
-P.G.
Oh? I'm glad I don't have to wait around this cliffie. Not go to Hogwarts? Well, I guess they are rather smart for their age, but still...
-P.G.
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