This chapter made everything from the last much clearer for me. I'm glad that you made Snape such a loving father.
-P.G.
I think this is a great start to a great fic, but I'm a bit confused about what's going on. I feel like either Snape would have to take the Dark Mark and claim Harry after Lily died, or claim Harry immediately and run with Lily far away. How could he claim him in a Voldemort-free world when the world was not free of Voldemort yet? Maybe it'll make more sense as I read more.
I do like the plot of this and the fates. Very cool.
-P.G.
| Title: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 14 Nov 2008 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed this story very much. I'm glad I found it in the archives.
Awww I love it! Great adorable stuff! I really really love this new life for Harry so much! I wish it was a full story so we could see his day to day life! Maybe a scene with Dumbledore trying to manipulate the Harry and Draco, or Harry's first class when he has to dumb down his intelligence so much! I understand that you're busy though- so no pressure! Great stuff!
Such a sweet ending. *coos* That was sooo brilliant. I'd like to read a fic where we follow Harry through his life as Harry Snape rather then just seeing flashes of it. It was really good. You came up with an amazing plot. Well done.
Aww, this is a nice story...
Love it! Perhaps a sequel?
| Title: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 01 Nov 2007 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: sely (Anonymous)
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brilliant story!go on with severitus,you write really really well(but please NO hp/gw if you can)
Very interesting storyline. I like the fact that James knew that Harry was Snape's child and was okay with it. And it is interesting to think how one decision could have such an effect on the whole world. I can't wait to find out how things could have been for Harry. Thanks for sharing...
| Title: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 01 Nov 2007 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Angel Boy was cute with a great premise, however, the father/son moments were rather lacking. Although Harry loved Sev, you gave no clear indication of what Snape was truly like as a father most of the time, especially for training years when Harry would have need support or encouragement when he was tired or didn't want to train. Hope you do more in depth character development next time as it would make a good story great.
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