| Title: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 31 Dec 2007 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Sorry, but I fail to see the point of all this. Harry was abused at home. Now he has it worse. Why?
| Title: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 31 Dec 2007 12:05 pm
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| Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous)
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I love this Snape. A study in contrasts. Poor Harry. The hairbrush scene was funny. Good to see that Harry is remaining defiant enough to hit Snape's shoe, or to attempt to send a note to Dumbledore. The schoolroom scene sounds positively Dickens-like. You must be having so much fun writing this. Whatever Snape's scheme is, he's good at it. I'm enjoying this story. Quinn
Wow. I'm really enjoying this story. I like the idea of Snape being poor, and you're doing a great job of making him a jerk. I don't care what other people say, if you like the story, you can write it. It's yours, not theirs. Keep writing, it's soo good!
Loved the chapter! You do so well at description. I wasn't sure whether to laugh or be horrified at the last scene. Poor Harry...in knee-length pants...lol. I can't wait to see where this story goes from here. I have a feeling like the lesson is just going to be a giant disaster...
Yeah, I'm going to agree with Harry that Snape has gone a bit off the deep end this time. He's seemed a bit unstable a few other times but a school room *whistles*.
That's not to say I'm not enjoying it. :)
Thank you for sharing and updating. I look forward to the next chapter. Have fun on your trip. Happy New Year!!
Awesome. Absolutely great! I'm so happy you found the time to post while out of the country -- you are truly fantastic :D
I hope your New Years Celebrations (German-style!) are fun!
Keira
| Title: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 29 Dec 2007 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Azalea (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 29 Dec 2007 10:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Haha!! Oh my goodness! Snape HAS gone mad, hasn't he? Poor Harry. But I was glad that he wasn't punished about the towel. At least not yet? I have a feeling that Snape's new task will be very unpleasant. Does Harry even know Latin verbs? Poor kid. It would be terrible if Snape made him wash his message off of the tea towel by hand. Where is Vampyr? Did he follow Snape into the house?
Great, great chapter! If I were Harry, and Snape was being so mean about the cleaning part at breakfast, I think that I might, later, pee all over his kitchen floor before making a run for the edge of the property. Or pee in his bed- I bet he'd like that, wouldn't he?
| Title: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 29 Dec 2007 9:01 pm
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Lol! Wow. I think I'm going to love the school part. It sounds hilarious. Have fun in Germany!
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