Oh, hooray! I wanted to stand up and say "Take that!" after Harry got done speaking. Harry's passion came through beautifully.
| Title: Chapter 5 - Searching Alleys
| 21 Jan 2008 4:55 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Absolutely loving this!! please add more soon, and Harry really needs Ginny to be there for hugs and snuggles and stuff!!
This is incredible. You've written Harry very in-character and I like that he keeps inviting people to stay in his house. I can't wait to see how Snape will treat Harry once he recovers. Please keep updating!
I love the snippy conversation between Harry and Snape. - Making someone angry is a great way to keep him awake.
Surely the government knows that Snape was a spy?
Snow in Atlanta - yep, looking out my window (here in Lithia Springs) and I still see the white stuff. Of course, since I spent years in Maine, Maryland and Alaska, I really hate the white stuff.
Good chapter!
I almost laughed at the when Snape started calling Harry names then Harry supplied a few...then Snape continued...then Harry...etc. lol
Anyway, good chapter and I hope to see another one soon. (As well as another chapter of 'The House that Time Forgot') *wink wink nudge nudge* ;)
| Title: Chapter 5 - Searching Alleys
| 20 Jan 2008 9:37 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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I find this story different but a very good one. I like the fact that Harry is finally starting to show some backbone because I felt he allowed his friends to walk over him and he was acting almost timid like with everyone. He started the ball rolling with saving Malfoy and he seemed to want to protect Snape now. I am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this story.
| Title: Chapter 5 - Searching Alleys
| 20 Jan 2008 9:01 am
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| Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous)
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Wow! That was awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.
AAAAH! I LOVE IT!
Poor, poor Snape! And the way Harry had to insult him to keep him alive was almost dark, in a funny sort of way. I could just hear Snape begging Harry to leave him. Oh, how awful! (It didn't help that I was reading this as I was watching the final battle from 'Troy'.)
Oh, wow. Thanks so much for the update. Can't wait for the next one!
-Elise
| Title: Chapter 4 - Shock
| 09 Dec 2007 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Tracy (Signed)
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Must...have...more! Augh! I feel so sorry for both Draco and Harry! Harry because he has so many burdens and Draco because, even if he was a little bastard, he seems so utterly broken now. Then you go and add bloody notes from Snape! Oh, you really have to update this soon!
Tracy
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