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Title: Chapter 7: Muggle Dueling 15 Jun 2008 11:25 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, I really hate Draco Malfoy sometimes...he such a total git. I know Harry was wrong to retaliate...sort of, but who could blame him? Malfoy definitely had it coming. I think his punishment should be more severe than Harry's...he did start the whole incident, and making fun of abuse is truly horrible. Ooh, Draco makes me so mad sometimes!

    I wonder Sirius' letter is. Did it fall out while they were fighting?

    Author's Response: I'm not telling, :P Lol. You can guess though, It's fun to see what the readers are thinking. Draco is SUPPOSED to make you mad, he's just speical that way, lol. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun 15 Jun 2008 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter! It's nice to see Harry getting to have fun with his friends, and just be normal kids without having to worry about saving the world. It was a short respite, but maybe it helped a little.

    I knew Umbridge was up to no good...I just can't wait to see her get her comeuppance! And Fudge too..he's such an idiot.

    And just what Harry needed...Snape in a bad mood to top it all off. Poor kid!

    Author's Response: Yes, I feel bad for Harry as well. I'm a drama queen, sorry Harry. Thank you for reviewing Kriteh!
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    haha scorpia! I loved this chapter! It was so funny! I didn't want it to end!

    Author's Response: Thanks Azalea!
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Draco are making slow progress towards getting along better, so that's good. I still don't like Malfoy though.

    I'm curious if the Snape/Harry interaction will increase.

    Good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Lol, I'm not going to try to change the way you think about Malfoy. I'll continue with the story and MAYBE you will grow to like him...or maybe ypou will get sdo kmad you want to kill the little ferret, :).  Yes,Snape is comimg soon.

    Thanks. 

Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Mystery (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh chunk him back in the lake. He needs to clean himself off anyways. Great chapter Scorpia. I'm really enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to seeing how you get rid of Umbridge, and how the relationship between Harry and Malfoy and Snape develops.

    Author's Response: ROFL, Yes. That would be great, just chunk him back in there. He deserves it, :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 4:25 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    My ribs! lol. That prank was awesome, I LOVED it! Soon as they started taking Malfoy's bed out of the dorm I knew they planned on placing him somewhere, but I wasn't expecting the lake! Let alone IN it! *wipes tears from eyes* Oh, I SO want those pictures! Dean's comment: “When we’re old and gray, we can look back and laugh our heads off,” made me snicker. I bet Sirius will love hearing about their prank, and Remus will be amused too, though he may give them a brief lecture.

    I too am proud of Ron for controlling his temper :) he did very well, though Malfoy WOULD have deserved at least a smack to the back of the head for that horrible insult :( Man, I HATE racism. Poor Harry will have to check his cloak for stains, what with Malfoy's atrocious eating that morning. I remember a couple times where my family was in a snit and you could tell just by watching how aggressively they ate their lunch, lol!

    The mud fight was fun! I'm afraid I would have to turn down Harry's offer to try it again, hehe. Malfoy sure can be a priss... wait a minute, I think I'D have complained too *looks sheepish* For the mud at least, but I would have enjoyed going outside after the rain, so I'm not AS bad, lol.

    Though it would be GREAT to read more pranks, Harry does have a point about the temporary truce being a good idea. I dread what the Slytherins plan for Harry once he gets back in the dungeons again *mock shudders* so please don't leave me in suspense for too long ^^.

    Please post again soon!

    P.S. As you can see, I live on! lol. I read your comment in the Shout box today and had to laugh :) Glad to see someone would miss me if I suddenly croaked for any odd reason, lol. Hmmm, shame you didn't dump Malfoy back into the lake like you offered... *cackles*

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you live. Got all your toes and fingers? Good. I would of liked to dump Malfoy bacxk in there but it would of interfered with what I had already written, lol. Maybe later. I'll do again, and again, and...you get the picture. Sorry it took me so longf to respond. I'm thinking about re-doing the fic. Checking it over for mistakes and changing minor thing, should I wait until the story is over? Thank you for reviewing Beth!

Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 4:25 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know what you envision your Draco to be, but it seem to me that it's hard to continue to hate another teenage boy when you've had a great mud fight with him. But Harry should have made sure Draco could swim first! ;--)

    Author's Response: You know teenage boys, they don't think. I admit that Hermione should of checked first, poor girl, she's always the responsible one. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 3:01 pm
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter!

    One small constructive criticism - you keep saying "could of", "would of" as in "I could of drowned". It sounds right, but actually it is spelled wrong! The right way to spell it is "could've", "would've" - the "ve" is short for "have", as in "could have" or " would have".

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm sorry about the mistakes. Thanks.  
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 1:55 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hehe "Gryffindor strikes back" sounds very sci-fi-ish you can almost hear the dramatic music in the background. Ha Draco gets his comeuppance! Does pink hair equal floating bed though??? I think Harry should start thinking about his neck though, does the boy have no sense of self-preservation? lol obviously not, i wonder what the sytherins have in store for him... Can't wait to see what you come up with. The floating bed was just brilliant, lol, ohhhh "The squid is going to eat me!” lol, Draco's just one big pussy cat really! Although its interesting to see Harry questioning his motivation in saving him, i smell potential............
    Cecilia

    Author's Response: Lol, yes it does. Wasn't meant to sound that way, I wonder if watching War of the Worlds had anything to do with it? Lol. Draco is an Aristocrat, prissy, stuck up and a total pain in the you know what, lol. And yet, I can't help but like his character. Stupid me. I'm glad you smell potential, hopefully it will stay that way. Thank you for your review! Sorry for not responding earlier.
Title: Chapter 12: Gryffindor Strikes Back 15 Jun 2008 11:36 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Malfoy's getting less iritating and kinder. The prank was awesome! But how come we didn't see Snape's and McGonagall's reactions? Also, why is Malfoy still willing to sit at the Griffindor table?

    Author's Response: Why? Because he's less irrate and he knows Dumbledore meands buisiness. Dumbledore has a reason for keeping them together. Thank you.

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