I did NOT SEE THAT COMING!!!!
“I was left on their doorstep in the middle of the night, Malfoy. With just a piece of paper explaining that my parents were dead and that, my relatives were expected to look after me. I probably wouldn’t be happy eithier if I was in their situation,” Harry said.
I find this inaccurate. Harry is a good and decent person, and any decent person who woke up to find an orphan baby on their door step would not be resentful of the child. They might be irritated at the moron who left them on the doorstep, but not at the baby. Pity and sympathy would be the main emotions and I feel like Harry would feel that way. Especially after how hia aunt and uncle treated him.
What the fuck?! Why the hell does Harry get the shit end?! He has to have most of his classes with Slytherins, doesn't get to see his friends as much, AND Malfoy drags him around?!
And ya fucking wonder why he can't think of any safe places!
I read this outloud to my sisters and we loved it. There were important scenes unimportant scenes. Shit cut off in the middle leaving questions and concerns. It was perfect.
I read this outloud to my sisters and we loved it. There were important scenes unimportant scenes. Shit cut off in the middle leaving questions and concerns. It was perfect.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 07 May 2021 6:36 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Great story. There were some nicely unique elements in here. Looking forward to the sequel.
| Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy
| 25 Apr 2020 10:35 am
|
| Reviewer: NoK (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
So good to read this again.
So good.
I'm off to look for the sequel.
|