| Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun
| 02 Apr 2008 12:28 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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what a great story, umbridge is so horrible, i can't find words nasty enough to describe her, can't we just put her in the electric chair and be done with it and snape nopt sure about him yet
Author's Response: Thanks Kreacher, I'm glad you liked it.
| Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun
| 30 Mar 2008 3:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Grimmjaw (Anonymous)
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Ah! A chapter! Problems led to my being unable to access the internet until now. It was horrible! But the the first thing I checked was your story and you updated!
Poor Harry. He's gonna get in trouble again, unless he focuses more on Occulmency.
I'm a little sad that you haven't yet shown the school's reaction, other than a few pointed whispers, and that Harry isn't doesn't seem that anxious about it when he spends most of the fifth book in a slump (this chapter and Harry was really cheery), but I can't wait for the next chapter. I'd love to see Draco Malfoy.
And I hate Umbridge. I glad that you're having the students revolt against her early. Gryffindors can plot too (although probably not as well as Slytherins). Will Harry read any more of the notebook left by Future Harry? (The How-To Guidebook on Saving the World XD)
Sirius sent a letter!
I really love your story. I still go back and read it from beginning to end a few times while I wait for the next chapter. I hope you update again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Grimmjaw, I reall apreciate your reviews! :D
this is a really good fic, please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks. :D
| Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun
| 27 Mar 2008 6:44 pm
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| Reviewer: PyroChilde (Anonymous)
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Hmmm, wonder whats up with Draco, more please :)
Author's Response: He's got trouble up his sleeve that's what. :) You will find out what I mean soon. :)
Yay! I'm glad you updated! Umbridge certainly made a comback with her threat of corporal punishment. She's practically doing that when they write lines on thier own hands. Anyways, excellent chapter and please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you Alexis, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
Great you updated! I was hoping you would! The practice dummy scene was great and so was the part with Ron, Harry, & hermione at the lake--that was hilarious!
And Umbridge . . .she needs to be throttled or something. Wicked evil old bitch! Can't wait to see her get hers!
And no, Sev would never threaten a student with either corporal punishment or curses because he's not evil and doesn't really hate children. Can't wait for the potions lesson!
I've finished my fic, so when you have time, R&R it please!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Umbridge will get her's, don't worry. :)
| Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun
| 26 Mar 2008 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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I love this line: "Umbridge, being the wicked lady that she was..." That was great. So true and simple. That Umbridge is EVIL. I hope something even more terrible happens to her than in canon. Yuck. I loved this chapter. It didn't seem filler at all. It just seemed fun to me. And mean. LOL Can't wait to see what happens in Potions Class. *rubs hands together in anticipation* Thanks, Scorpia!
Author's Response: Lol, Your welcome, I'm glad you liked it Obsidian. Thanks for reviewing!
I clicked on this story so fast your head would spin when I noticed your update!. This chapter held quite a surprise, Umbridge is a twisted toad! Hopefully Harry and his friends can think of some way to contact the parents and solve this mess. As for Draco, well you already know how I feel about him so it should be so surprise that I'm not upset Draco made only a small appearance in this chapter ^^; I just don't like the racist prat. I won't mind him popping up though if you keep him in character and not a main character. You've done a good job so far with keeping all the characters sounding as they should, wonderful work! This story has been truly enjoyable to read so far, the content is great and your ideas are brilliant, it's put together really well and just sounds how it should. I absolutly loved how Ron and Hermione are slowly getting together, very funny and cute. Can't wait for the next chapter! Snape sounds like he isn't too pleased wiht Harry, I'm anxious to find out what he has planned.
Author's Response: Lol, Wow Beth, thank you! Draco will contiue to be evil for a LONG time as you will see in the next chapter. He's gonna be in troubblleee! (singing)
| Title: Chapter 6: Fighting and Fun
| 26 Mar 2008 12:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Azalea (Signed)
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The reasons for the friendship between the Trio came through loud and clear in this chapter. It also is clear that quite a lot of responsibility has been laid on a young boy by his older self.
Author's Response: I hope your review meant that you liked it, lol. Thank you. :D
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