| Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 07 Feb 2017 1:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done a wonderful chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy
| 07 Feb 2017 12:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very clever idea and very well written thank you
| Title: Chapter 2: The Apology
| 07 Feb 2017 11:55 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the apology not surprised Severus didn't accept it!
| Title: Chapter 1: Consequences
| 07 Feb 2017 10:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a very dramatic start to the story thank you
I have very mixed feelings about this.
The plot and characterisation are great. I especially liked how it was not easy for Harry to persuade Snape to resume Occlumency lessons. And I was practically cheering in the scene where Draco struggles not to kill Harry.
And even though the story is sprinkled with typos, it still managed to keep my attention, which is unusual.
But.
It is unfair to tell your readers that this story is complete when it isn't. Yes, you did intend to write the sequel straight away, but it is six years later, and you clearly haven't been able to. These things happen, I do understand that. But if I had known the story was unfinished, I would have been able to avoid reading it -- and thus avoid being left in the lurch. So please, for the sake of future readers, mark this story as incomplete, or put some kind of author's note at the start, so people who prefer not to read WIPs can avoid reading this. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 05 Apr 2014 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Really like it. Especially how you got Dumbledore to play the Malfoy's till they had to switch sides. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 30 Mar 2014 12:18 pm
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| Reviewer: mysinger (Signed)
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Magnificent chapter! I wish this had been in OOTP. Very well written.
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 04 Jan 2014 1:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Genuka (Signed)
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I look forward to the sequel.
Don't get discouraged. Keep up the good work!
| Title: Chapter 27: The Will to Live
| 24 Oct 2011 6:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Lumcer (Signed)
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This seriously needs a sequel and to be checked over for errors. A lot of off's are spelled of.
KCK-Lumcer
P.S. I'd appreciate it if you let me know if and when you post that sequel.
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