| Title: Look at Me...
| 30 Nov 2021 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good writing and idea thank you.
I really liked this. It's still unbearably sad and I hate that Snape died more than just about anything else when it comes to the books (I hold out hope that they'll deviate from that in the movie... hahaha. If not I'll somehow organise a walk out ^-^) but I think it was horribly brutal to have Snape day and only let him have three more words before the end when he'd done so much. There should have been more, so thanks for providing that ^-^
and nice job of keeping Snape so in-character ^^.
I like how mature your Harry is. I found it really annoying how the 7th book ended so abruptly and Harry never got the chance to apologise to Snape in person.
I wish he had seen Snape instead. Poor man. Well done, I enjoyed that :)
| Title: Look at Me...
| 24 Jun 2008 11:47 am
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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Ooh. Very different. Snape is definitely OOC. I think. Of course, being dead might shock you into some weird behaviour! I totally agree that Harry should have been able to reconcile with Snape!! It was so unfinished somehow. Still, all the more raw material for us to play with online I suppose...
| Title: Look at Me...
| 17 Feb 2008 10:32 pm
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| Reviewer: applepie (Anonymous)
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It's a pity Severus never had the time to explain himself to Harry. This is definately the way it should have happened :) Great one-shot!
Good idea for a oneshot - I always wanted Harry and Severus to have the chance for a last talk :-)
That was great! Very fast-paced, very too the point. Tres magnifique! I had always wished Harry would get to talk to Snape after seeing his memories, and you made my wish come true! Thanks!
Your story was tres belle!
-Elise
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