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Title: Growing up 12 Sep 2008 5:48 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This was sooo funnny! 'Specially the lasy chapter - almost reviewed it for itself! I really loved little Harry saying that Snape was ancient. And I thought the way you brought him back was great. It really did seem like a 18-yr-old:father relationship. Nothing too mushy or unrealistic for Harry's 'manhood'. Also, I liked the inclusion and acceptance by so many characters. The floating shopping basket was a great idea. And Dudley was sweet. I should really stop. I'm going to see if you have any other stories. (:

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I am so happy you liked this. The Harry deaged parts are my favorite! I personally love the one where he says Snape is ancient since that one comes from a story of when my sister was that sme age! He,he.

    I don't have more stories on Potions and Snitches but I do have them in fanfiction.net under the same penname. 

Title: Growing up 24 Aug 2008 4:22 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a charming story and a fun read. It's also proof that a story doesn't have to be fifty chapters long to be a good one. I don't think that the characters are OOC. Living through a war changes the way the survivors react to things, so Severus' acceptance of events and the knowledge that Harry is actually his son and Harry's accepting Sev as his father are not problematic.

    Great work and well done!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you had fun!
Title: Growing up 19 Jul 2008 8:42 am
Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting! I don't think I've ever read a DH compliant pre-epilogue story before, and I really liked it. The last line really got to me, though - fantastic work!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you had fun!
Title: Growing up 08 Jul 2008 5:23 am
Reviewer: Morrolan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this muchly.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Fatherhood 14 May 2008 7:35 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the ones where Harry was five and six. They were hilarious!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Growing up 03 Mar 2008 6:59 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    I just loved the last bit with Severus and Lily--it was too cute! Great job, keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I loved it too! I had another ending but that was just too sweet.
Title: Growing up 09 Feb 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. I think it is perfect the way it is so there is no need to second guess. Thanks for posting it.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Growing up 09 Feb 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, it was nice and I really liked it. -nods- I hope that you write more so that Iget to read more!! -grins- Anyway, it was a nice story to read and I enjoyed it very much!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Fatherhood 09 Feb 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, hell! Now you have gone and done it! I really, really loved this chapter and I now I am hopping off to the next one! It was really nice and I hope that the next one is the same as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: The twin’s gift 09 Feb 2008 12:54 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay....I so didn't expect that to happen! I mean really, one moment Harry was drinking from George's goblet and the next, he was a toddler! I don't what to say but the chapter sure was unexpected. -grins-

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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