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Title: Housemates 09 Feb 2008 12:29 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha!! The end was nice and I can't believe that you managed to write something so nice without making the characters occ. I really liked it. Way to go!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! It was hard to keep Snape snarky and at the same time have him creating a relationship with Harry.
Title: Lily's secret 09 Feb 2008 12:12 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice and I am going to read more of it. So, yeah, actually I never thought about it that way, Remus living and telling Severus that Harry was his son but hey whatever floats your boat, right?

    Author's Response: Thanks! I always thought that it made more sense for someone to decide to spill the secret for some reason than for Lily to leave a letter to be delivered 17 years after her Death. Why seventeen. Why not when she dies so he can take care of the child? Especially since I didn't want to have any change in how Harry looks ocurring.
Title: Growing up 09 Feb 2008 12:04 am
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story! Thank you for spoiling me with it. I especially liked how you fitted the deaging into the story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Growing up 08 Feb 2008 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an enjoyable read!

    The only thing is, you say at the end that the full moon is the only thing lighting the room, but Remus just popped his head in the floo and spoke to Severus and Lily. Shouldn't he be becoming a werewolf somewhere?

    Good story though!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    That was my way of implying that a cure to lycanthropy was found. If it was Severus and Harry's twicking of the Wolfsbane or someone's else I left to the readers' imagination! But I like to think that a cunning mind like Snape's could come up with something. 

Title: Growing up 08 Feb 2008 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thoroughly enjoyed this fic - a nice short sevitus, well done. For those of us who wished the ending of 7 hadn't been so bloody, a thoughtful different conclusion that feels better. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Growing up 08 Feb 2008 3:57 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed reading this very much.Thou I would like to have read a longer version with more incidents of every year that the de-aged Harry lived through you did very well with this version. It flowed well, was fast paced but not rushed. Enjoyed reading it very much.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Growing up 08 Feb 2008 1:16 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. That was very nice indeed. I wish that Harry could have aged one week for each year between 11 and 17, but, at least, he had his childhood.

    Good for Fred and George

    Author's Response:

    I had thought about that but since I wanted him regaining the memories from the Dursleys I didn't want him to have  memories of Professor Snape the Greasy git from the dungeons clashing with his daddy. I thought he'd be too young and then I'd have to go into deep emotional troubles and I wanted to keep this light even though I love to read the angsty fics that deal with those conflicts. So, I figured that if he only regained those memories once he turned eighteen he would be more mature and capable of separating the two.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Growing up 07 Feb 2008 10:47 pm
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED this story!! I think you did excellent with the characters and even with the effects on everyone from the loss of Fred. Actually, the best I've read so far. I am going right now to see your other stories so I can read them as well!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Though my other stories are on fanfiction.net under the same penname because they are not Severus and Harry centric.
Title: Growing up 07 Feb 2008 9:53 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    It was kind of fun reading a quick Sevitus and de-aged Harry fic. I like the way you actually accomplished this. You said in the heading, though, that this fic was humor. I almost didn't read it thinking it would be a spoof.

    Author's Response:

     

    I put humor in the heading because I hardly ever write anything without humor. I even manage to put jokes in the midle of angsty, deep passages. And this was mostly humorous. Most of the kiddies part were intended to make people laugh.

    I'm really glad you had fun, that was what I wantedto do and  thanks for reviewing!


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