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| 10 Apr 2008 11:20 am
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| Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (kirei_tara) (Anonymous)
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*chuckles* I thought the exact same thing was going to happen. I say give the Devon the Diaper-head (I wanted to say something extremely profane, but I didn't :P)an impotence potion or charm for an undeserved length of time and blackmail him to leave Mia out of it....or he will be impotent for the rest of his life. *grins* Of course a little "roughing" Devon up wouldn't be to bad either. Hm, maybe Sev could threaten to use his privates as potions ingredients? Harry is not the only one with an evil mind as you can see. :D Great chapter by the way, and I just know for a fact Harry's going to get caught. *shakes head* Will the boy never learn? Severus reminds me of how my Mom was in many ways, and you just didn't cross the lady. :D
"Dad's gone! Yessssssssssssssssss! Hogsmeade here I commmmmmmeeeeee!"
Author's Response: That's for darn sure, as Harry will learn, to his sorrow. But what can you expect, he's 13 and we were all stupid at that age--God knows I was--and think we can outsmart our father or mother. Riight. They've got experience and they know just how our little minds work!
Hmm I have a feeling Harry will use this opportunity to sneak out since Severus is gone. I hope Sev hexes Devon big time too! :)
Author's Response: And you'd be right, since this is Harry we're talking about and he acts first and worries about consequences later. As for Devon . . .he'll get his don't worry!
Yay! I am really glad to see that Draco didn't catch the snitch. He would have been absolutly unbearable if Slytherin won. Great chapter! :)
Author's Response: You're absolutely right, since he was always unbearable to start with!
is that a real question?
at this point i would just let sev do what ever he wants!
Author's Response: Well, I would like to see what people come up with! LOL!
nice job on this one!
love the wandless magic!
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to have Aria do something a bit different, since she is, after all an American witch.
| Title: Permission Denied
| 10 Apr 2008 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Oh man, is Devon in for it now! Kick his ass Sev! Loved the pouting Harry, it's so typical of a bratty 13 year old, as I should know--I've got one!
Author's Response: Yes, he is and I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry, I have several teenage nephews so a lot of his behavior is based upon them!
| Title: Patronus Rising
| 10 Apr 2008 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Aww! I loved Remus's reaction and the way Sev threatened to tie Harry to the bed! LOL! And I'm happy the kids made up at last and can't wait for the next chapter! Well done!
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like it when best friends fight! And Sev's threat is so typical of an exasperated parent, dontcha think?
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| 10 Apr 2008 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Ooo! Now I can't wait to see what happens next. I think Severus should turn Devon into something nasty, like a spider and step on him!
Author's Response: Nice suggestion! Thanks!
| Title: Patronus Rising
| 10 Apr 2008 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter! I loved every bit of it! I like how you're developing the relationship between Remus and Aria and Harry and Severus, it's very realisitic! I'm off to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate your reviews!
*squeel* I can't wait for the next chapter! I have to know what Sev does to Devon. I think he should castrate him. Or use one or more of Harry's suggestions.
Also, is Harry going to try to sneak into hogsmead since his dad's gone? That would be something Harry would do. And I would love to see Sev's reaction to that.
Please update soon. I can't wait till the next chapter. Be creative with Devon!
Author's Response: I agree! As for what harry does when Sev's gone . . .well, you know the old saying, when the cat's away, the mice will play? You'll see what happens to Devon tomorrow, I'll post it as soon as I'm done with it, like maybe tomorrow morning!
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