Please finish this story.
Nice! Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Jun 2008 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous)
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Hey, this is great! You've got to write lots more soon!!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Apr 2008 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Lina (Anonymous)
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This looks like it could be a really good story. Hope to see more of it soon. ^_^
very well written so far, please keep going!
poor harry is certainly suffering, i assume grief over what happened to cedric and now he has to go and talk to dumbledore and harry wouldn't feel like talking to anyone, i hope dumbledore will understand this
Very good chapter. It's well written and full of love, just the way I like it. So many people make either Ron or Hermione or both, into awful people, that it's refreshing to see a story in which they're good guys again. I love it!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 25 Apr 2008 6:38 pm
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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This story is great; I really like the way you show how devastated Harry is, how badly affected he's been by the TriWizard Tournament, and the loyalty of his friends. I hope you update soon xD
This is a great start. I think you've managed to keep Snape in character, so well done. Harry is as well. keep going!
Poor Harry. Glad he has his friends beside him to help him while he's down. This chapter was slightly longer, good effort! ^^. I like how you write Harry's inner thoughts and feelings, makes you really understand what the character is going through. Hope Harry recovers, it's sad to see him so depressed ;,;
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