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Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 12:38 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so sweet! My eyes started tearing up just reading it.

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks, glad you liked it!
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 12:32 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    wow! very well written. *hands you a kleenex*

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really  needed one!
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 11:25 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was somewhat painful to read, the things that tobias did when he was drunk but seeing the strong tobias feeling remorse at the end was very enlightening and having severus comfort him will help them through this ordeal

    Author's Response: Yes, it will and together they can heal and eventually grow closer as a family.
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 10:44 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    God, that was just too emotional. At times I have to remind myself it’s just a story but I know the sad truth is that there are many children out there who suffer the same trials every day.
    I was glad you wrote the scene in the school; because it showed that Sev's hurt was not only because of the physical pain and that there could be emotional scars as well.
    Glad they both cried. Tears wash away many hurts which could lead to true forgiveness
    This story is so well written I hope you consider writing your own novel… I would definitely buy

    Author's Response:

    Wow, what a great compliment! Actually, I have written many other original works and am looking for an agent to publish them, but it's hard to find a decent one.  Sadly, there are too many kids who do suffer emotional and physical abuse just like Sev, which is why writing this seems to connect with so many people.  And the tears at the end were a necessary part of the healing process and the fact that they were both willing to abandon the old rule that men don't cry.

    If you would like to see one of my original novels, I have one posted on fictioncentral.net, it's a retelling of the Norse God Loki's life and you can find it under my penname Sevswife, story Magician of Asgard. 

     

Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 9:31 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* wow...that was something else...

    i just love reconcilliation

    Author's Response: Thanks and so do I, it's one of the highlights of my writing.
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 8:38 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, now everyone is crying - including me.

    Those were horrible images but I think the one that hurt the most was the one where Tobias failed to show up at school. It could have been worse, he could have shown up drunk.

    Author's Response: And so was I, believe me.  And I'd say you were right, it could've been worse, but the disappointment was awful.
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 2:21 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff, sniff* I'm almost in tears myself. It was perfect. Better then I imagined it.

    Loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next.

    Author's Response: Yay! That's the best compliment!
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awwwww.....

    Author's Response: Yeah, you can say that again! :)
Title: Through the Eyes of A Child 29 Apr 2008 1:57 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally ignored the kleenex warning and I must admit that I came a bit close to needing one after reading this. You captured the emotions so well, expecially what Sev was thinking when his dad didn't show up. Very well done chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! That part got to me as well, it's like having a birthday party where no one shows up. 
Title: Last Chance 29 Apr 2008 1:01 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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