More, soon??? Please!? I like your writing, keep at it.
| Title: Snapshot Four - Would You Sir?
| 10 Dec 2008 3:36 pm
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| Reviewer: R2M (Anonymous)
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Oh!!! You have to update! What horrid spot to stop at!
| Title: Snapshot Four - Would You Sir?
| 10 Dec 2008 12:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg! Too funny!
He dreamt of being spanked, and then he misbehaved so he could be spanked and then held after. Too much!
Can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Harry's request! ;)
| Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch
| 30 Oct 2008 12:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Not comfortable with this chapter. Hitting a person who is in physical distress already just seems very off.
| Title: Snapshot Two - Later
| 30 Oct 2008 12:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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So cute; His talk about the spanking then seeing reality was priceless.
| Title: Snapshot One - The Teddy Bear
| 30 Oct 2008 12:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Cute,Look forward to reading more.
| Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch
| 17 Jul 2008 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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LOve it! Please post asap!
| Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch
| 15 Jul 2008 12:05 am
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| Reviewer: Lysitheia (Anonymous)
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So cute! I rea;;y like this Snape.
| Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch
| 14 Jul 2008 4:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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Awww! Poor Harry! Snape's a meanie! He spanked cute little Harry! Okay you did well. This was a very well written chapter and I especially like the part where Snape wanted to hug Harry and he recoiled in horror from the thought. Lolz! Imagine if he had! Wouldnt we all have liked to see Harry's face? The last line was also precious. And your portrayal of Harry when Madam Pomfrey said that it served him right and how he admitted to feeling warm inside. It really does make us realize that poor Harry is just a little kid who wants people to love him and fuss over him and take care of him. So great story, hope you continue!
| Title: Snapshot Three - Quidditch
| 14 Jul 2008 2:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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The boy really does need someone to look after him and hold him responsible for his recklessness and Snape is just the man for the job, I just hope he knows that Harry will start depending on him not just for discipline but protection, security and fatherly love as well
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