A friend once asked what I would do to get even with someone I hated. I told him that the best revenge would be to save the person's life (at personal risk to my own.) My friend was very confused and couldn't figure out the vengence. I told him - "just think - for the rest of his life, he will owe it to the one person who hates him and will never stop hating him."
In high school, in a "psy" discussion, everyone was asked to write down colors that they saw when they thought of an emotion. One of the emotions was hatred. Out of 30 people 29 wrote "red". I was the only one who wrote "black"
I am thinking that Severus would have written black also. Hopefully, he will see the boy (and the son of Lily) and forget about James.
I like this idea and the whole different universe thing makes sense. Thanks, I can't wait for more.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 06 May 2008 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Zeak_Morgan (Anonymous)
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This story is so awesome, it's barely even started and I love it. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Also we share a great deal of the same thinking, what you said about when Snape died is exactly what I thought, but I doubt I could have put it as well as you did into words.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks! That was my favorite part of the chapter and I really hoped someone would comment on it.
Oh yes, I like this. I am looking forward to more.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 8:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE IDEA, WONDERFUL JOB IN COMING UP WITH IT!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I have a question though if you don't mind, does Snape eventually care about harry. I couldn't tell, sorry if i missed something.
Again great job with the first chapter.
THANKS FOR READING AND WRITING!
Author's Response: Yes, of course! It's no fun if he simply stays bitter at Harry! Don't you love when plans backfire?
You have a very strong unique voice in this. I feel that this prologue will be a truly fine addition to your story instead of too frequently, the 'necessary filler.' Good job, two thumbs up, and I can't wait to read some more.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 7:11 pm
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| Reviewer: readersam (Anonymous)
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OOOOOOhhhh!!! Like your idea. You get the 'mentoring/fathering' with a major Slytherin twist.
Interesting concept. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 4:52 pm
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| Reviewer: ER (Anonymous)
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Oooh! Fascinating. I love the writing style. I like the line "But that story has already been told, and is in fact not mine to tell." I can't wait to read more!
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Zem (Anonymous)
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Wow - great premise! Looking forward to seeing what you do with this...
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