This is so exciting! I love it. Absoloodle.
Excellent beginning!! Very well written.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 11:57 am
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| Reviewer: Vickie (Anonymous)
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Cool start to the story..........can hardly wait to see where you take it from here.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 10:46 am
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Okay I'm not very good at this but here goes... I really like the plot idea, and revenge is very in character for Snape although I can't see Him smiling, nodding perhaps? I eagerly await the next chapter.
Author's Response: I was a bit worried about the smile too, but it has a purpose. It's rather important for the next chapter that he smiles. I feel I can justify it as a very Slytherin tactic to further his machinations. :)
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 10:29 am
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| Reviewer: Azalea (Signed)
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ooo awesome! I love it so far! good job! I like the idea!
Oh, now this one I like. I love Snape's motivation, poor twisted bastard...
This is going to be so incredibly wrong. I can't wait! I think it's very Slytherin for Severus to have this reaction, as well as practical.
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 7:33 am
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| Reviewer: SH (Anonymous)
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*cackle*
Promising beginning :)
| Title: Prologue - Two Universes
| 05 May 2008 7:33 am
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| Reviewer: fj (Anonymous)
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waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!
I love this!! Your writing is great and I love the concept of this. How cunning, how slytherin. I'm assuming from your summary, however, that all of this will end up rebounding upon Severus and he will love Harry.
Great story! Please continue.
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