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Title: A Light In The Darkness 11 Jun 2008 12:49 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AGAIN, GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GREATLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!

    Author's Response: Thank you and I should be posting the next chapter within the hour!
Title: A Light In The Darkness 11 Jun 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great chapter and good to know that harry and co have a ally on there side in this awful kidnapping saga and there escape is going to be soon.

    to anwser your poll evil dan should die but a slow lingering death or is that idea to blood-thirsty

    Author's Response: yes, the kids are going to be out of there by the end of the next chapter and Dan will be dead by then as well, look for my update within the hour to see how it all turns out!
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I definitely vote yes, but Severus should get to torture him first.

    Thanks for the terrific story!

    Author's Response: You're welcome and I'll add your vote in.  As for Sev torturing him, remember he is a Healer and can't harm with his magic.  But maybe I'll let him break a few fingers.
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 9:50 pm
Reviewer: sharkiepatronus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yes he should die or hes just another muggle voldemort...sanguinus is the one that really needs to go though...he's awful

    Author's Response: yes, they're both terrible people and I look forward to giving them what they deserve! Look for the next one in an hour!
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 9:39 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I have been thinking that once they get the letters, then give a sniff of them to Inky and Padfoot. If they can get close to the hideout, then those two, following the scent of their kids, should be able to lead the rescuers right to them

    People tend to forget the power of the sense of smell in animals.

    The way Magnus patted Harry on the shoulder and called him a trooper reminded me of Tobias. Could be he is a former Ranger or military of some sort.

    Author's Response: Good idea, and Inky will have a major part to play in the rescue as a matter of fact.  You'll find out Magnus's whole story next chapter, he's not all he seems either.  As for Dan, oh Danny boy, hell is a'calling!  Thanks for your review as always!
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Add a "hell yes" to your list of vote for me! Dan has been useful to the storyline, but its time for him to go - plus, he deserves it ;)

    Author's Response: OK, I shall and that's another yes for death.  Dan's just not a popular guy is he? LOL.
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 6:19 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i love how you put in an undercover cop in the mix!

    and hell ya! kill him..maybe even set inky on him! *cue evil laugh*

    i can't wait till you update!

    Author's Response: And you'll learn even more about Magnus in the next chapter. So far the vote is kill Dan hell yes.  And the next chapter should be up in an hour.
Title: Where Are the Children? 10 Jun 2008 6:02 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    what errors?

    it's hard to imagince severus blushing...but it is a cute image.

    on to the next story!

    Author's Response:

    You mean there weren't any?

     

    Ok, and I love to make Sev blush!

Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 5:58 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, poor little Harry took one for the team there, didn't he? *snuggles him*

    Death would be the easiest way to snuff Dan out of the picture, but I'm not sure it would be the most emotionally satisfying ending for Lexy. He obviously loves his daughter, since he went through the whole kidnapping thing. He just doesn't know how to show it. Abusive parents have usually been treated as such during some portion of their childhood, unfortunately. If there would be a way for Dan to understand Lexy's pain before he's offed, I think that would be more of an effective way of dealing with him, And, no, I don't mean a spell that will make him feel an invisible slipper across his bum for the next twenty years. I just mean that in the company of Aurors and her parents, she should be able to tell Dan how much he's hurt her... Or something.

    *shrugs* Sorry for the essay, but you did ask for suggestions. LOL. ;)

    Author's Response: That's an interesting insight into Dan's motivations, and it's partially true, a part of him does love his daughter, but he really is a selfish nasty bastard and he loves Lexy mainly because he can control her.  There will be a scene where Lexy confronts her father in the next chapter, but I really don't want to leave him alive, it would cause too many problems for Severus and Alaina.  And Lexy too.  Thanks for the suggestions though, I appreciate them greatly.  And yes, poor Harry, but a hero's lot is never easy! Even when you're only eight and not the Boy Who Lived.
Title: A Light In The Darkness 10 Jun 2008 4:17 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Huzzah for Harry's 'angel', and I really like what you've made Sanguinius into; the drug smuggling sounds very plausible (and so does the murder). Severus is going to kill Dan when he sees his face *cackles evilly*

    Author's Response: Yes, Sanguinius is a nasty guy, like his whole brotherhood and he'll be going down too.  And I've got something planned that Dan will not like at all.  Look for the next update in an hour!

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