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Reviews For Growing Pains
Author's Response: Thank you and I should be posting the next chapter within the hour!
to anwser your poll evil dan should die but a slow lingering death or is that idea to blood-thirsty Author's Response: yes, the kids are going to be out of there by the end of the next chapter and Dan will be dead by then as well, look for my update within the hour to see how it all turns out!
Thanks for the terrific story! Author's Response: You're welcome and I'll add your vote in. As for Sev torturing him, remember he is a Healer and can't harm with his magic. But maybe I'll let him break a few fingers.
Author's Response: yes, they're both terrible people and I look forward to giving them what they deserve! Look for the next one in an hour!
People tend to forget the power of the sense of smell in animals. The way Magnus patted Harry on the shoulder and called him a trooper reminded me of Tobias. Could be he is a former Ranger or military of some sort. Author's Response: Good idea, and Inky will have a major part to play in the rescue as a matter of fact. You'll find out Magnus's whole story next chapter, he's not all he seems either. As for Dan, oh Danny boy, hell is a'calling! Thanks for your review as always!
Author's Response: OK, I shall and that's another yes for death. Dan's just not a popular guy is he? LOL.
and hell ya! kill him..maybe even set inky on him! *cue evil laugh* i can't wait till you update! Author's Response: And you'll learn even more about Magnus in the next chapter. So far the vote is kill Dan hell yes. And the next chapter should be up in an hour.
it's hard to imagince severus blushing...but it is a cute image. on to the next story! Author's Response: You mean there weren't any?
Ok, and I love to make Sev blush!
Death would be the easiest way to snuff Dan out of the picture, but I'm not sure it would be the most emotionally satisfying ending for Lexy. He obviously loves his daughter, since he went through the whole kidnapping thing. He just doesn't know how to show it. Abusive parents have usually been treated as such during some portion of their childhood, unfortunately. If there would be a way for Dan to understand Lexy's pain before he's offed, I think that would be more of an effective way of dealing with him, And, no, I don't mean a spell that will make him feel an invisible slipper across his bum for the next twenty years. I just mean that in the company of Aurors and her parents, she should be able to tell Dan how much he's hurt her... Or something. *shrugs* Sorry for the essay, but you did ask for suggestions. LOL. ;) Author's Response: That's an interesting insight into Dan's motivations, and it's partially true, a part of him does love his daughter, but he really is a selfish nasty bastard and he loves Lexy mainly because he can control her. There will be a scene where Lexy confronts her father in the next chapter, but I really don't want to leave him alive, it would cause too many problems for Severus and Alaina. And Lexy too. Thanks for the suggestions though, I appreciate them greatly. And yes, poor Harry, but a hero's lot is never easy! Even when you're only eight and not the Boy Who Lived.
Author's Response: Yes, Sanguinius is a nasty guy, like his whole brotherhood and he'll be going down too. And I've got something planned that Dan will not like at all. Look for the next update in an hour! |
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