| Title: The Meanest Man in the World
| 08 Jun 2008 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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oooH That evil *&%$#@ he ought to be shot dead! I hope Tobias kills him, he deserves to die! Really good chapter though!
Author's Response: Thanks and I agree with you!
Poor kids! Those men are a bunch of creepy bastards, have they no morals? At least they are feeding the kids and allowing them a bathroom break, otherwise that would be child abuse. I sure hope that Magnus guy really is a nice guy and somehow helps the kids out, but there is always the possibility that Hermione is right and he is faking it.
Lexy’s very lucky to have Harry and Hermione as friends. So long as they stick together, they can get through this. I hope the adults find them soon though, they’ll be really devastated with the news.
Hope to read the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: For now they're doing that. But Dan might change his tactics once he realizes that he's not going to get his way, he's a miserable SOB like that. And you're right about the kids sticking together, but they might not be together for much longer . . .There's still some surprises ahead for everyone concerned. Thanks as always for your awesome review!
Oh, I just knew it was HIM! As soon as I finished sending my review for your last chapter, the thought hit me right in the face that the guy could be Daniel! Just waiting and lurking, searching for his daughter and EX, waiting for the opportune moment. Creepy O_O!
I sure hope the kids get out of this alright, those guys sound like they mean business. I bet Sev will know something is wrong though, since Harry left his amulet and is currently missing. Who knows how long it will take to find the kids though?
Off to read and review your next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, they are no laughing matter and there are more of them than just those three, as you'll find out later on. And Sev will move heaven and earth to rescue his son and Lexy and Mione too!
| Title: The Meanest Man in the World
| 08 Jun 2008 7:12 pm
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Oh, I can't wait to see the reactions of Severus and Tobias *evil grin* Great job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks and their reactions are sure to please those who love an angry Snape!
*sniff* that was sad. Please let Sev rescue them soon.
Author's Response: I know and it's about to get sadder . . .but help will be on the way . . .as soon as the adults figure out who has the children.
| Title: The Meanest Man in the World
| 08 Jun 2008 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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good chapter, well well written anyway, like how you are going about the whole kidnap thing, don't like evil dan though, he should be locked up
Author's Response: or how about dead? I'm voting for that one!
| Title: A Stranger Is Watching
| 08 Jun 2008 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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OMG, you don't have a kids day?! But, but... the International Kids Day is June 1st! Hurry up and celebrate. Better late than never :) Little-sun
Author's Response: haha! That's a good one! I'll tell my nieces to mark it on their calendar.
| Title: The Meanest Man in the World
| 08 Jun 2008 5:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I wonder if that Magnus is a wizard. It would complicate the rescuing if he put some wards around... Little-sun
Author's Response: yes, it might. And you never know . . .
| Title: The Meanest Man in the World
| 08 Jun 2008 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm. I really appreciate it and I'm working on chapter 21 right now!
ahh poor kids!
Author's Response: Yes, and they're about to have even worse things to deal with.
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