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Title: Raising Inky 04 Jun 2008 11:39 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    The romance was sweet. I feel for Harry but he deserves whatever he gets. Tobias is going to be mad as hell when he wakes. I can't wait. update soon!

    Author's Response: Yes, he is, no doubt about that!  And Sev already is, so you know Harry's in trouble big time.
Title: An Appropriate Punishment 04 Jun 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job here! I could really feel all their emotions. I agree with Sev's motto, I try to never punish my kids unless I'm in control of my temper. I think Harry knows better now and won't be pulling anything like that ever again.

    Author's Response: Glad you agree with that, since it's something I always felt should be done, but seldom is by most parents.  Harry and Ron have learned their lesson.
Title: An Appropriate Punishment 04 Jun 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent! I liked how Sev handled this and I'm sure Harry learned his lesson. Also, the argument between Sev & Tobias was great, it really brought home to Tobias that his idea of discipline was way too harsh. Loved the scene at the end.

    Author's Response: Thank you! The argument scene was an idea given to me by laume, for which I'm very grateful and I think Tobias realizes at last just how damaging his discipline policies really were.  Harry has learned his lesson and he will be more careful in the future with regard to pranking people.
Title: An Appropriate Punishment 04 Jun 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very appropriate punishment Firstly telling them that Tobias and Sirius could have gone into a coma or die will have more of an impact than anything else it brought home the seriousness of their actions it also allowed Harry to accept the other parts of his punishment
    Sev's motto of punish in haste, repent after is a good one, as Tobias would have found out. Tobias finally saw the impact of those harsh abusive punishments on Severus; he indicated that in a week’s time Harry would not remember the few swat that Sev would give him and that was not good, well Tobias has seen the alternative Sev remembered his punishments vividly for a lifetime and it was not really good. There is a huge difference between a firm hand –even using a wooden spoon or a hair brush, and a ranting angry abusive belt or whip. Sev loves Harry and I don’t think that Harry is going to develop into a spoilt brat and Tobias once calmed down should acknowledge that Sev is doing a good job. Love that Tobias was the one to cuddle Harry afterwards.

    Author's Response: Exactly! There is a world of difference between Severus's methods and Tobias's, which is the point I was trying to make here.  I think by now that Tobias has finally realized that and regrets what he has done and will continue to try and make amends to Severus.  He does love both his son and grandson and while he may act all gruff and stern outside, he really does have a soft side, as you can see by what he says to Harry at the end of the chapter. 
Title: An Appropriate Punishment 04 Jun 2008 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great work!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 8:07 pm
Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I love the romance! You really know how to write it. But I don't envy Harry or Ron now!

    Author's Response: Thank you! And I don't envy them either, the little buggers!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! Great Chapter! I am so excited they expressed their love for each other. Ron and Harry are going to be int Trouble!

    Author's Response: Heaven help them, but they are in soo much trouble! Thanks for reviewing! You're a great R&R-er!
Title: Just the Way You Are 04 Jun 2008 3:19 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sevs and alainas date went really well and was really well written and very true to there characters, little rina seems cute for a baby, glad sev has seen her. sev and alainas talk about being perfect was a really enlightening conversation.

    oh dear someones in trouble and i did warn them to hide, i can see corner time coming up

    Author's Response: Great and I'm glad you liked it.  I tried to give them some time alone plus a little romance too!  And yes, the boys are in so much big trouble!
Title: The Bedtime Prank 04 Jun 2008 2:46 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great prank by ron, harry and the twins who helped invent the product but oh boy, they are so going to get it in the neck, i advise all of them to hide or run very fast in the opposite direction

    Author's Response: Too bad hiding won't do them much good! *smirks evilly* 
Title: The Bedtime Prank 04 Jun 2008 1:50 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh No that is so not good!

    Author's Response: No, they really are in serious trouble this time.

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