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Reviews For Growing Pains
Author's Response: aww, you're sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it!
Author's Response: Definitely, that's the way it's going.
Author's Response: Yeah, they sure know how to throw them, huh?
can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: thanks and soon enough they'll be in trouble in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I loved that part too!
Author's Response: Umm . . .how about one of harry and Inky?
Daniel just gets more and more awful. He's not going to find them is he? Maybe Sev could set some wards on the house or something. Nothing violent- like a repelling charm or transfiguration into a toad perhaps. Or what about Sirius and Remus come to put up the 'violent' wards? Alaina is such an 'open' person - she doesn't mind telling people her problems. I think that's a great way to be - "a problem shared is a problem halved" and all that, and it definetely makes the story go faster. I was wondering about how comfortable sev is about telling his problems though. He doesn't strike me as the type to want to share his past. -Even after Alaina had practically told him her life story in date number 1, all Sev really told her was that his mother is dead, his dad is a recovering alcoholic, they went through a period of not speaking to each other and had to work through some 'issues'. There has been a lot from the kid's point of view, so I'm not really sure how far the relationship has gone beyond kissing (on the lips! - like eww! gross!). Has Alaina seen Sev's scars? does she know about the 'old Tobias'? What was her reaction?/what will her reaction be? and on a completely unrelated note, what about taking Alaina wizard christmas shopping? :) Maybe I'm only saying that because it's something I want to do. Lexy would like Honeydukes too. Anyway... http: // au.geocities.com/chocoholly1/ doodles_from_pharmacology.html here is another tree picture for you. It was really sweet of you to put another tree reference in last chapter - thank you! I will have to draw other stuff now as well. lol Do you have any requests? Bearing in mind my very limited drawing capabilities. As I have mentioned before, when it comes to art, I'm good at chemistry. Hell, I'm even better at maths. :( I also have a not quite finished doodle of sev and alaina kissing, but it isn't turning out right so I might redo it later. oxoxox ps. omg I once stuck beads up my nose too! lol and ate play dough! *giggles* how embarrasing for the poor kids! Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yes, sev does tend to be very private, but he will open up to Alaina more in an upcoming chapter and I loved the picture. It was so sweet! I'm very flattered my work inspires you so much. Thank you! My sister stuck pearls up her nose too! nd drank perfume and ate a whole bottle of baby asprin! LOL! That's where half of my ideas come from, my crazy family.
prince henry (harry) is 3rd in line to the throne after charles and william Author's Response: Yes, well we all go through that! And thanks for the tip about harry I wasn't sure, and i corrected it.
I will continue to be amazed at how well you write those kids, I LOVE reading in their point of view! Their thoughts and comments are really amusing, sometimes I can relate to them, and other times I feel like I'm going to fall off the couch laughing. Darn those embarrassing parents! Those poor kids, major sympathy. The scene after Alaina got the flowers was funny too, Harry's comment "I don't want to be a prince anymore," I said quickly. "Too many people want to chop off your head." lol! Then poor Hermione got all upset and Harry was all sweet and tried to make her feel better, awwwe! I had to laugh at Harry's horror when she kissed him. I think Sev's story of Lily when they were little was equally cute! Makes me want to hug them ^^. Next chapter sounds great! Can't wait to see what happens on Sev and Alaina's night out. I wonder what Harry, Ron and Lexy will get into while they are away? I shudder to think what Tobias would go through if the twins were added to the mix! I think he’d sue, hehe ;). P.S. I have a sinking feeling Alaina hasn’t seen the last of Dan. Please tell me I’m wrong? If not… run Alaina, run! lol Author's Response: Thanks for your great review! I tried to think of what I'd like at one of these affairs and that's what I came up with. As for the trouble the kids get into . . .just wait till the next chapter! It's quite funny! And for Dan . . .I can't answer that question yet. |
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