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Reviews For Growing Pains
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll be seeing it soon!
Author's Response: Yes, he does indeed. And I'm glad you liked the donuts, I felt that way after more than one diet believe me!
severus shouldn't punish harry for his outburst, he is only venting his feelings, i would if i was sev have a special day just for him and harry once a week, they do on that day whatever harry wants to do and nothing else, just to show that harry is still loved Author's Response: Yes, Harry is very jealous, as can only be expected with him being the center of attention for so long. And in the next chapter, Sev will have a long talk with Harry and explain things to him and help him to understand that you can love many people and not love one more than another. And I think the Harry day is a great idea, my sister did something similar with her son when he was jealous of his baby sister.
Poor Harry he is not accustomed to sharing his dad, it would be hard for him, it has been the two of them for so long and as Sev never went out with anyone else in the past this is an all new experience for Harry and he does not know how to handle it. Sev and Harry need some father/son time to talk Author's Response: yes and when I wrote that part I went aww . . .after I re-read it! I agree, Harry and Sev need some time to talk and they will be doing that in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes and Harry has had Sev to himself for so long, it's a big thing for him to have to share HIS father.
Author's Response: I know, me either, which is why I try and write at least a chapter a day so my readers don't go nuts waiting to see what happens and I don't lose the flow of my writing, because it's really difficult to pick up a story when you've been away from it for weeks at a time. Thanks for reviewing.
I think Harry is probably feeling nervous about all the changes - he's not used to having all these people around. It really is a lot different from just having friends over. What harry needs is sev to convince him that having a girlfriend isn't going to make him love harry less. I mean- it's not as though you can run out of love - there will always be enough for everyone. Anyway, apart from harry's disapproval, the relationship is looking good! I expected a bit more awkwardness o.0, but maybe that's because I'm a teenager. lol dates always turn out awkward for me! Lexy seems like a nice kid. Harry and Lexy will probably get along quite well if they ever become siblings (well - as well as siblings ever get along). Lol - go tobias! Admitting his mistakes is a very good sign! I suppose he gets practice with that at AA meetings :). Neway - every chapter of growing pains and never again has made me smile. Sometimes it's because you are so damn funny, sometimes it is adorable, but always it's honest and interesting and well written. Even when you talk about issues like abuse, you write it with a lot of sensitivity and maturity. I have this story stuck in my head now - I have a (very messy) sketch in my chem book of harry and lexy hanging out of a tree. It's all your fault I got distracted in chemistry! I don't have a scanner tho, or i would show you lol xox Author's Response: You're right and Sev will be having a long talk with Harry about how he will never love him any less and just because he has new people in his life doesn't mean Harry will be put aside. And I'd love to see that sketch of Harry and Lexy, who will be doing a lot more togther now, including get into trouble!
Love how much Tobias is changing and I hope he and Sev continue to bond Author's Response: Yes, you're right and Severus will not punish him, he now realizes that Harry's initial acceptance of Alaina and Lexy was a temporary thing, and they will have a long discussion about what is bothering Harry and how much Sev loves him and will always love him. Tobias will also get in on this transition in a later chapter and help Sev convince Harry that his dating Alaina is a positive thing. Thanks for reviewing!
can't wait for the date to come! Author's Response: Thanks and I'm almost done beta-ing your chapter too!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'll be updating probably tonight ot tomorrow morning! |
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