| Title: Chapter 2
| 09 Jun 2010 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: rd (Anonymous)
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Awesome. I'd love to see more of your writing (I've read your other fic too ^^). Maybe a little continuation/prologue style fic after this?
Excellent ^^
Please continue this! I love how Harry is actually doing the right thing, and doing it creatively.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Jul 2009 6:29 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Loved it! It was GREAT! Especially the part where Snape opened all the Basilisk stuff!
more? Soon? This is very good so far! Love the Alice in Wonderland reference!
Yep, I still love this! “either that or the smell’s addled his brain” makes me crack up every time!
Please, please, PLEASE update this it is amazing! Snape AND Harry taking the initiative AND the basilisk! It's almost to good to be true. I love how Snape's so suspicious of the note and how far Harry's gone to make amends - love it.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 28 Jun 2008 6:28 pm
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| Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous)
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That was fun, and oddly enough, this seems to be a very good stopping place. (Not that I would mind at all seeing more of your excellent talent.)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 11 Jun 2008 11:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Neko Youkia (Anonymous)
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Wow, not only does this have a good plot, but it also involves Snape and a grandeur sense of humor! I'd say that this story is the greatest mix with in a fanfiction story I've read in a long while. (I especially enjoyed Snape taking points from Harry for his... odor, and Harry's little note that came with the Basilisk Fang.) Keep it up!!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Jun 2008 3:11 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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This was a good chapter. I think the basilisk tooth label was a little unlike Harry. But whatever... it's your story!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Jun 2008 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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this is really good! And a great idea - I've not seen any other stories which deal with the pensive incident like this. I think it's nice the way you have Harry taking the initiative, AND trying to make amends! Well done! Just one thing - you've missed out a few words, like 'hate' I think.
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