Very promising start!
Please update soon!
This story seems really interesting, and it's a fascinating concept of what's happened to Severus. I look forward to an update.
Title: Gain of Another
| 06 Jul 2008 6:47 pm
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Reviewer: Ebonie (Anonymous)
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Too lazy to log in.
However, the story is amazing! Keep up the good work.
Title: Gain of Another
| 06 Jul 2008 1:13 pm
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Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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WOW! I didn't expect that. I at least thought Sev would keep his memories. This story is going to be interesting, I can tell. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
(screams) Wow, well this has never been done before. I must admit, I'm surprised. Cool idea, I wonder. Does Severus have his adult memories still? I kind of wish he was Harry's older brother instead of twin. That way he could take care of Harry, it wou;ldf be so sweet, :) But, your way is good as well, snicker. Love the idea!
Title: The Loss of a Loved One
| 06 Jul 2008 10:37 am
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I thought Severus seemed a little out of character in some places. But, It's harder to day because this is before Harry goes to Hogwarts. So over the years he may of changed into his dark, grumpy self while Harry wasat the Dursleys. It's a good idea, i want to see more baby Harry! Are you going to show how they grom as a family like the story Eight or are you going to skip to Harry's Hogwarts years? Will there be any Draco...(grin) A Sexy Snape? Who would of thought, lol. Keep it up! Scorpia
This is fascinating - poor Severus, he survives his father and now he has to survive Petunia, Vernon and Dudley.
The good thing is that with two targets, maybe the boys might not be as abused .
For Harry, having a brother will be great - someone to share the joys (whatever that will be) and the sorrows.
Looking forward to more.
Title: The Loss of a Loved One
| 04 Jul 2008 10:57 pm
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Reviewer: khjf (Anonymous)
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good so far, can't wait to see more!
Title: The Loss of a Loved One
| 03 Jul 2008 1:54 pm
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Reviewer: angel (Anonymous)
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I really like this, update soon! It sounds as if this is going to turn out to be really good.
interesting beginning. I look forward to the next chapter.
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