| Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Jul 2008 6:07 pm
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| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous)
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Sooooo SWEET!!!! Please, write more!
Your Melfis.
Harry is so cute, good start.
Certainly an intruiging start. You've managed to include enough details to make me curious about what will come. Good job.
Whoot! Good story. Keep it up!
This was so sweet. I loved seeing Sev asa loving Daddy and toddler Harry was just adorable. It's going on my faves list.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 15 Jul 2008 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: Lysitheia (Anonymous)
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Adorable. One small thing--Harry sounds more like he's two than three.
Other than that, very cute.
Harry is so cute. write more soon
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Jul 2008 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: reven (Anonymous)
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Awwwwwwwwww!! This is too freaking adorable. I love it!
Aww, that was sweet and very believable too! I hope to learn more about how Sev stole away harry and I loved that he turned DD into a parrot, good for him! Maybe then he'll learn not to meddle!
I love stories with little harry and have written 2 of my own, if you'd like to R&R them! He's so adorable when he's that age, I'm asuming he's 3 right?
Loved it!!! How far is story going and when do you plan on updating PAinful Guardian
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