Harry is just toooo cute "his bottom always stung for … uh years and years after a smacking" he is just to adorable
An incredibly sweet story, Dina. I loved this. You really have a way with characterizing the little ones, and I enjoyed the bit of humor you threw into Harry's thoughts: "He did not want Daddy to smack him, no, Daddy's hand was too big and his bottom always stung for … uh years and years after a smacking."
The exaggeration of a three-year-old just made me smile.
I'm glad you've decided to continue this :)
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Jul 2008 12:37 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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Whew! Do you ever know how to write a heart-jerking story.I LOVED IT!please continue. P.S.Albus Dumbledor a Parrot? that is soooo Snape,LOL
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Jul 2008 12:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Rosewolf (Anonymous)
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How cute!! Great first chapter... pls update soon.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Jul 2008 11:33 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Very bittersweet.
I enjoyed it.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
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