| Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath
| 24 Jan 2009 8:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelsea (Anonymous)
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snape is actually taking harry's input?..can't believe it...can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Door of Light, Gate of Breath
| 24 Jan 2009 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Truckles (Anonymous)
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Great chapter!
Loved this - 'Besides, the ministry had leveled a six percent tariff on foreign harvested unicorn hair. Who wouldn’t want to read about that, perhaps five or six times in a row? I’m a very slow reader, Potter.”
hahaha :) Good job keep it going.
I've really enjoyed this so far. But i must say i really do look forward to your chapter end notes!
Ach, you're chapter made me want to read the start of the Illiad again, but I can't find the book anywhere! Anyway, great chapter - I could easily picture Snape reading Harry to sleep here, and he would have such a wonderful reading voice too... If only the fan girls could corner him and make him do an audio-tape! I liked how you made Harry rather hyper after his nightmare and how Snape put him in his place and wouldn't let him turn night into day!
| Title: Sing, Muse
| 07 Jan 2009 12:51 pm
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| Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous)
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Nothing else to say but great chapter :P
| Title: Sing, Muse
| 07 Jan 2009 11:31 am
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| Reviewer: ORKCHILD (Anonymous)
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Don't youmean must present review at dealership not prevent. Pretty light weight chapter but anything better than nothing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Glad to see another chapter on this story - I've missed them. I liked this scene, short, sweet, and rich. My dad used to read to me at night when I was little, so I have a fondness for people who read to help children go to sleep.
Please write more soon and write more!
| Title: Tension
| 05 Jan 2009 12:46 am
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| Reviewer: Kiwi (Anonymous)
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I am simply loving your story
taking me out of my pathetic life and into another's
Its almost as fun as reading the books
(so i would gladly set a rabid unicorn on you if you stop writing)
I usually review when i am done reading...
But your end of chapter note got me...
I love werewolves and do not wish to repel them
so I hope your lieing
*sniff*
Anyway! Good Job!!! Your amazing thanks for taking me out of my boring pathetic life!!!
Awww poor Harry! he's so cute when he is emotional, Severus may need to work on his comforting skills though lol : )
| Title: Dark of the Night
| 04 Jan 2009 11:19 am
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| Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous)
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Jeez this was a great chapter, plenty of angst. I loved the last line of
“Shh, Harry. They can’t hurt you worse than they did, child. You’ve nowhere to go but up.”
and how Snape helped him get over the grief of losing Sirius.
Seriously can't wait for the next chapter!
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