| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 06 Jan 2016 9:54 am
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| Reviewer: KittenPie (Anonymous)
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I know it's been ages but you should really finish this - it's really well written!
Love it are you going to update in the future:)
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 23 Sep 2014 4:13 am
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| Reviewer: Hermione703 (Anonymous)
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You should continue this.. :D
I enjoyed it.
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 20 Apr 2014 7:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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will you post more for this story please? i have a question. will you pretty please make harry a metamorphmagus? i cant wait for more of this story. thank you so much for writing this story for people. :)
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 25 Mar 2014 5:27 pm
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| Reviewer: huvs (Anonymous)
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While this story is very well written, and the character portrayal is really well done, I am very bothered by the fact that Snape is treating Harry horribly and way overdoing the punishment, and Harry is okay with it. I understand why Snape might have done so in the beginning when he hated Harry, but once he started to care and understand what Harry has been through, I would have hoped he'd be more understanding.
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 21 Feb 2014 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: Georgia (Anonymous)
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Interesting story. It would be good to see the perspective of some of the adult. Why did Dumbledore and McGonagall give Harry to Snape without saying anything to him and without any perceptible reason. Why does Snape seem to think that abusing an already abused child who has no faith in adults will make the situation any better?
| Title: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 17 Feb 2014 4:16 am
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| Reviewer: YC (Anonymous)
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Please continue writing! I love your story and I can't wait until the next chapter!
I would love to see some more scenes where harry and snape start acting more like a family.
Please update this wonderful story. I really want to see it to the end-- the suspense is killing me !!! You're a great writer! :)
| Title: Choices and Other Serious Business
| 16 Nov 2013 4:46 am
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Anonymous)
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I don't want to tour Malfoy Manor.
Anyway, you shouldn't force ppl to review.
Your writing itself should do that.
But I commend you that your writing is exceptional.
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