I don't wear socks in summer, in fact I hardly wear shoes at all so HA! Lol. My favorite chapter, your brilliant, really!
Thank you for writing this wondeful story and I hope to read more later!
Lol, poor Harry. He deserved I guess, not all adults are like the Dursleys. It should be kind of obviousthat they don't work the same way. Now he's sitting on a stool. I wonder how bored he'll get. Snape could have put him in a corner, I wonder which would have been worse. Your way Harry hast to sit on his sore rear but it get's very boring standing in a corner. And It's embarresing. I'll shut up now. I enjoyed this chapter!
(Sticks toungue out at Aragog) I was going to review without threats...although the spider does help with some I guess, lol. Greatjob so far, this is going on my favorite story list. Only the best go there. (Grins) Keep it up please!
| Title: Nightmares and Dreadful Realities
| 31 Jul 2008 3:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Snape meet's the Dursley's chapter, sqeals! Lol, I have to read it now. But I must say it was good and longer then the last.
| Title: Conflicts and mysteries
| 31 Jul 2008 3:53 pm
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Aww, that was short. Too short. I love the way your story reads. I don't know why for sure, lol. I can just look at it and it 'looks' like a good story. And so far, it is one. The characters are great and the angst/drama is wonderful. You are doing wonderful!
| Title: Release
| 29 Jul 2008 7:25 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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lost whole last review in short love keep writing.
all my socks smell, so they would kill them all, my revenge on all nargles.HAHAHAHA
| Title: Tension
| 28 Jul 2008 11:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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Ok Velveeta lol
I like this story. Actually I kind of like this End note. I was so scared that Harry was going to get spanked with the switch again and I thought it was cool that Snape threw it into the fire. Good job so far
Hey, keep those nargles away from - oh, wait, I don't have a - never mind.
Children hate to sit still and have to think. Maybe something Severus said will get through to Harry. Those three were very that they made through 7 books without losing limbs. Well, they made it mainly because the author liked them. In reality, they would have been eaten by Fluffy.
| Title: Release
| 28 Jul 2008 9:53 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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This is actually a very fascinating scenario you are building here. With both of them so mired in their own feelings about themselves and each other. The reality of each one's thoughts are completely opposite of what the other is actually thinking. It will be very interesting to watch as the two dichotomies merge, if that is indeed what you have planned.
I especially am interested to see Snape realize that Harry's little fidgets and sighs are not acctually in defiance or because he's a brat, but because he's so insecure, and I sincerely hope that Snape will be able to provide Harry with what he needs.
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