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Title: Loss of an Heir 24 Sep 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Draco--being thrown out like old socks !

    But, on the bright side--now he'll have a real father, and there won't be anything preventing Snape from adopting Draco now!

    As usual, you have managed to make me feel the character's emotions.

    Please update again soon; I always look forward to them!
Title: Loss of an Heir 24 Sep 2008 2:41 am
Reviewer: Nyx19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it keep it up.
Title: Loss of an Heir 23 Sep 2008 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah now that's a typical Malfoy response, if it doesn't live up to your expectations, get rid of it. Poor Draco. Well, at least he will have a better home with Severus. But I pity any other child they have.
Title: Loss of an Heir 23 Sep 2008 9:51 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww poor draco : (
    good chapter
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 21 Sep 2008 5:20 am
Reviewer: murgy31 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it!
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, just never catches a break--does he? I think that the way you had Snape handle Draco was perfect--the grass is always greener on the other side, isn't it? Draco needed a harsh lesson to enable him to understand the seriousness of his actions.

    Please update soon-I'm really enjoying your story. I must admit also that although I really don't like CP in stories; you have not abused it -- you have kept the punishment only for the most serious offence, and he only used his hand. I do find 15 swats alot though-- but I have seen alot worse in stories; and yours is so well written that I don't mind it so much. I would prefer you find others ways to punish them though.

    Please update soon; I'm anxious to see the continuing developement of the relationship between them.

    Oh, and one last wish--I really hope that Severus can pry Draco from Lucius' claws and get custody of him.

    Ok, so this is really a long-winded review; but I'm excited about your story. Please update soon!
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 8:10 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. Keep it up.
Title: A Trip Down Memory Lane 20 Sep 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter here! I think Draco will finally understand why Harry is the way he is, and how much it means to him to have a normal family and people who care about him. That beginning scene with petunia was heart-wrenching . . .I wanted to hug Harry and put HER face on the stove and see how she liked it! Wicked wicked woman!

    And the detentions will drive home Severus's point further to Draco that Harry doesn't need any more grief added to what he has to bear already.

    yay, we both updated! :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, it hurt to write that scene - but Draco needed to see it. Hearing about it is one thing, as he states at the end - but actually seeing the events from Harry's POV drives it home.

     

    I've been loving yours, BTW - Things have been crazy so I have only had a chance to read this week - but the chapters are quite awesome! Your cliffy has me wondering if Sev is going to save the day, and the Pegasus. I'll have to check now and see if you've resolved that!

Title: Consequences II 18 Sep 2008 5:22 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the twist on the dueling club, lockhart's such an ass! I liked how you had Sev make Nott pay for Ron's wand, maybe that will help him change his attitude towards Harry now. And Draco really surprised me, I wonder what kind of punishment Severus will give him? Maybe a spanking?

    Author's Response: Ah, maybe... maybe not. Whatever it is you can be sure it's appropriate.
Title: Consequences II 17 Sep 2008 6:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh naughty draco! good chapter, i like how ron's wand was broken and that nott has to pay for it : )

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