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Title: Enemies 09 Aug 2008 8:42 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is great! :D Can't wait for an update! Your Snape is nice and Slytherin—and prejudiced against Harry. ::) Adds interest, though. Great job!
Title: Enemies 09 Aug 2008 2:45 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is looking really good! I really like the way you had the events play out, mayjor build-up. I feel so bad for Harry right now and the poor guy isn't out of this yet.

    Please post again when you can!
Title: Enemies 09 Aug 2008 12:13 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    yay. i was freaking that you were going to have snape strike him again or something equally asinine
Title: Enemies 09 Aug 2008 12:00 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. Harry really is a pot waiting to overboil and you did it beautifully. Snape taking advantage whereever he can is also very Snape like. It's rare that people portray him with that particular quality, and it's a shame because he's not completely honorable. Good job!
Title: Enemies 08 Aug 2008 10:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    well, that was a surprise, Severus actually apologized to Harry. Things are very tense between the two here. I like how Sev healed him, and the flashback scene was well done also. Can't wait to see what else Harry tells Severus.

    I'm adding this to my fav's, by the way. :)
Title: Animosity Building 08 Aug 2008 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Lord, what's going to happen now? Gotta hand it to harry though, he's got guts calling Severus THAT name. He's lucky he didn't end up as a wall decoration. Not that Severus was right to hit him, but you have to admit, Harry really was pushing the guy's buttons. I hope Snape finds him soon.
Title: Enemies 08 Aug 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story. For someone who keeps his emotions as repressed as Severus does, and is under so much pressure, I think it's very plausible that he'd strike Harry in a moment of anger. I look forward to chapter 3.

    Olympics: GO AUSSIES!
Title: Enemies 08 Aug 2008 8:31 pm
Reviewer: maidenkay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY Canada. 9though I don't think the summer games is our strong point, well have to wait 2 more years) um...yeah, great story keep writing XD.
Title: Enemies 08 Aug 2008 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Title: Animosity Building 08 Aug 2008 11:34 am
Reviewer: catherine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant, i thought it was really good. I hope you update soon.

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