| Title: Animosity Building
| 08 Aug 2008 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous)
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Interesting start. Looking forward to the next part.
Hm, I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story! Well written, and a long chapter and all :D
But since when do they celebrate Thanksgiving in England? ;)
Wow...just wow! Lol, I was so excited when I saw the summary. These lessons always make great stories and they were one of my favorite things from book five. This first chapter was wonderfu1 I can see nothing wrong with it as far as grammer, and thank you for the strong language, profanity warning. A lot of authors don't think of warnings, I like to know beforehand.
I can not wait for more, will the other chapters be just as long? (This ones's size was GREAT) Do you have a certain day you update on? They were both in character and I think you did Harry great. Severus seemed to feel bad for hitting Harry by his actions. I want to see what he will do now that Harry's fled. Thank you for starting this story! You're brilliant!
| Title: Animosity Building
| 07 Aug 2008 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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NICE!!! I'm greatly looking forward to the next update.
| Title: Animosity Building
| 07 Aug 2008 7:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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