Another terrific chapter. Your writing is excellent. I loved the way Snape handled Malfoy, and hope this experience enables a truce of sorts between the boys.
This was such a wonderfully angsty and touching scene. Thanks so much.
I love this side of Ron - strategic, loyal, brave, and capable!
What a horrific experience. I wish Harry would say something, but I understand his insecurities. Great chapter!
I’m back for another read. This opening chapter was so nicely done, with a cliffhanger ending! I loved all the insights strewn throughout.
This was quite clever:
“Well then, we must assume it is unlikely to turn up. It’s not as if it walked away on its own.” Minerva gave Hermione a sharp look. “It didn’t, did it?”
“No, Professor. It wasn’t one of those books,” Hermione agreed.
What a wonderful story! Special mention for your depiction of Ron, which was original and insightful. But truly I loved everything here. Kudos.
Wow, Art of war according to Severus Snape. Doesn’t sugar coat, does he!
Wow, Art of war according to Severus Snape. Doesn’t sugar coat, does he!
Loved this chapter soooooo much!
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