| Title: Birthday Surprises Part 2
| 11 Aug 2020 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Birthday Surprises Part 1
| 11 Aug 2020 7:35 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good for you Harry should be involved, thank you
| Title: The Wards and Occlumency
| 11 Aug 2020 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good start to the story
An interesting story. Thank you for writing it.
I feel a bit dizzy reading it, because of all the jumps in time. Takes some getting used to.
(To other readers, the rest of this story plus it's sequel, 'Ameliorating..,'is posted over on f.f.net.
Sometimes you can get lucky cross-checking different 'adresses.')
Best regards.
| Title: Escape
| 05 Jan 2011 8:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Interesting story so far. Update soon, please.
Oh wow! This is getting so intriguing.
Can't wait to see what happens when Faye sees Severus.
Glad that you've updated. Looking forward to more.
So Lucius was a spy also, how interesting. And I like the fact that Sev was trying to figure out Parseltongues, and that he let Harry call him Severus.
I have enjoyed this story a lot so far. Congratulations on writing a really good tale! You do have some areas of opportunity as far as grammar and certain expressions (making it obvious that English is not your native language), but they don't usually detract from comprehension.
I look forward to reading more!
Nice. I'm looking forward to your next chapter,and what will be revealed about Lucius!
Nice. I'm looking forward to your next chapter,and what will be revealed about Lucius!
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