I thought Severus died?
Author's Response: I rewrote that bit :D
Very original plot, and you write very well. I don't like to see Snape suffer, but you DO write it really well! ;)
Fabulous. Simply fabulous ending. Bittersweet but just as wonderful. Thnak you for sharing.
I guess you just had a plot outline and followed it. You had such great emotion going, I feel bad telling you I'm disappointed you ended this already.
It was such a promising premise, I do hope that at some time you revisit it and rework this into a longer storyline. It's just too good to end so abruptly.
Author's Response: Okay. You are right. I will try and change it, make it longer. I'd like to know what happened in those six years anyhow. Thanks for reviewing
This chapter was probably the best of them all. Update? Please? Mila
| Title: VII. Lacrymosa
| 18 Oct 2008 2:46 pm
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| Reviewer: guignou (Anonymous)
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That was AWESOME ! I'm waiting for next chapter !!
Thank you ! :)
Lacrymosa is right! I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes right now, hoping against hope that you will have them get closer, in spite of Severus' limitations and fears. Go on!
You are doing such a fine job with this story. How imaginative, to have the Elder Wand come under the dominance of Vernon Dursley! I like the burgeoning friendship between Harry and Snape.
Keep up the good work!
| Title: V. Tuba Mirum
| 16 Oct 2008 3:39 pm
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| Reviewer: HeliosTor (Anonymous)
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My friend tabbycat put me on to this story and she's right it's really really good. I'm glad you did take this line with the story, nothing that's happened yet is beyond belief; there aren't any contrived coincidences, it just flows. brilliant, i'm looking forward to how it continues so keep writing! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :)
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