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Reviews For A Wolf in Winter
Title: Silverstrike's Legacy 15 Dec 2008 10:28 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, please, write more. You have to save Sirius.

    The only fault I could see was Severus' fake threat to send Harry to the Dursleys. No parent should ever threaten to send their child away - especially to people who treated the child badly.

    But I want to know more about how Severus got Harry and how they live and everything.

    Author's Response:

    Hmm . . .never thought about that, but first they're going to have to figure out Sirius is innocent before they could attempt a rescue attempt.

    You can blame Remus for Severus's comment, since he suggested that to him and sev took his advice.  Of course, he would never really do that.

    As to how Sev got Harry, that part is in Snowflakes and Memories, and I might just write a few other little fics to fill in about his other years with Severus. 

Title: Silverstrike's Legacy 15 Dec 2008 10:12 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! Encore! This was a beautiful story, perfectly capturing the magic of a child and a parent and what it means to love and have a family. It made me laugh and cry.

    Please, make another sequel.

    Merry Christmas and thnaks for the coffee and the cookies . . .mmmm!

    Author's Response: Aww . . .you're sweet! Have a Merry Christmas and relax!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you gave us both harry and sev's viewpoints here, they were well thought out and appropriate, I felt bad for each of them. I can relate to Sev's wishing he didn't have to punish his son, it's tough always being the heavy and hoping that your kid doesn't hate you for it later.

    I loved the dialogue between Severus and Remus, it was done perfectly, and I especially loved the part when Severus says, "Well, what are you waiting for? Christmas?"

    Beautiful1 Hope Remus can make Harry feel better and that haryr and Severus reconcile.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Sev has some great lines, doesn't he?

    Glad you liked the scenes and that I made you feel sad for both of them, like I did.

    Thanks and hope you like the end.

Title: Silverstrike's Legacy 15 Dec 2008 10:06 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hooray for Remus and Silverstrike! I'm so glad Remus was related to Will and all. This was such a heartwarming brilliant story.

    I would love to see more of Harry, Sev, & Silver, maybe when Harry goes to Hogwarts?

    Merry Christmas to you too and thanks for the eggnog and cookies1 Yum!

    I loved this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll consider a sequel at  a later date, once I've started on some of my other fics.
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it, they both reacted as expected and Severus' sarcasm was hilarious. My favorite line was, "You mean you can't huff and puff and blow it down? What kind of wolf are you?"

    Awesome! LMFAO!

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that line too! You can see what happens since the next chapter is up!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 3:30 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Damn...

    Was I wrong. I like this Remus. I hate him in the book. So much. He's an idiot in the book. Just as bad as Sirius.

    Never would have guessed that. Hmm...

    Update soon.

    Author's Response: I like him too! He's much more concerned with his behavior towards Severus here and making amends, more of a responsisble adult, even if he is a wolf.  Thanks for your review, as always.
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 1:58 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I did wonder if Silver was Remus in the beginning, and I'm really glad he was! Harry's reaction was heartbreaking and so accurate, I do hope Remus can calm him down. Thank goodness Remus was able to convince Severus that he was a good wolf! Good cliffhanger, I can't wait!

    Author's Response: I'm glad I got Harry down, that part was a little bit tough to write, I didn't want Harry to see like he was overreacting or something.  Remus should be able to help him and it helped with the convincing that Remus couldn't lie to Severus.  The next chapter's up!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 11:48 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Bloody Brilliant! I can normally spot some of your plot points, and I had originally thought of Lupin when Silver was introduced, but as his description did not match Lupin, I discarded this guess post-haste. You definately pulled the wool over my eyes - well done!

    In answer to your question, I may enter the christmas story... I've been thinking of something all morning... we'll see.

    Author's Response:

    Ha! I was hoping most of you woouldn't suspect till the end who Silver really was.  That would ruin the surprise.

    Anyhow, you can read the rest of this now, it's been posted.

    Write a Christmas story, Zara, I'm sure it'll be great!

Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 7:22 am
Reviewer: Maria (hpfanficfan) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I was right, shite. *cough*. I thought that might be lupin when in saw that he was one of the main characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    You were, great job with guessing Silver was Remus.

    And you won't have to wait for long, the last chapter is posted.

Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 4:30 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the conversation between Severus and Remus, I suspected it was Remus and am glad that it is him : )

    Author's Response:

    yes, i couldn't write a story with wolves and not include Remus somehow.

    The next one's up, and you can see what happens now.  Thanks for reviewing!


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