“For your information, my story was fine!” Severus retorted. He lifted Harry up and shifted the boy to get some much needed blood to his calves. “Children's tales are a bunch of ridiculous nonsense, full of gibberish and fabrication. My stories are based on facts, and noteworthy historical figures. They are both entertaining and educational.”
LOL! That is very Severus-like behavior. This is such an adorable story. The way Severus is behaving with Harry is sweet yet still snarky. I love Sev's internal dialogue here, it's hilarious!
Reminds me of Snapegirl's stories :) Mila
I found this story to be very endearing and "marshmallow core" Severus to be more believable than many. The paint scene was probably my favorite, and I thought Harry's tantrum scene was also believable. Severus' declaration of "I changed my mind" when it came to the stuffed dragon was very telling of his character. He's not necessarily a fluffy sort of person--he's still Severus--but you've managed to make him the right kind of stern without overdoing it--same with the fluffiness :-) Nice job; I really enjoyed this!
Very sweet story, and I want to just hug Harry!
Sev too! LOL
Aww this was a sweet first chapter. Sev needs to talk to another parent and discover that all kids have days when they just erupt and flip out for no apparent reason. But still, Sev handled it well, he didn't let Harry get away with it and he wasn't too harsh either.
But why do I get the feeling that wasn't the last time Harry is going to pull something like this?
Something tells me there is troubled waters ahead.
And I've updated my fic BTW.
This looks like fun. I hated temper trantums.
| Title: Part I
| 14 Dec 2008 2:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Me... (Anonymous)
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I really liked this. I liked how you started at the beginning, with the "Once upon a time"...and for a reason I kept reading like if i was reading to a child...lol
I do hope you keep writing and that you update often. The stories I really like are few and I must say, I really like this one.
Oh, and the part where Harry thinks his Daddy is mad and that Severus thinks that Harry is mad made me laugh! They trully are so alike!
Well, hope to read more about A Harry and A Daddy!
Bye!
From Me.
yay good chapter and story plot keep it up.
Aw, sweet story!
Little Harry sounds very precocious and adorable1
Looking forward to the next update!
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