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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 14 Mar 2010 11:01 pm
Reviewer: b (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I absolutly love this story.

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 14 Mar 2010 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I was glad to see Ly and Eathan acting like younger brothers who get cranky and try to get their older brother in trouble. I am glad that Harry was able to use his applicator in time. Thanks so much for the update!

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 14 Mar 2010 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so beautiful N. Forest and you too grugster.

    Great chapter, and I really loved the ceremony. Great work.

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Title: Chapter 71 – Trouble with little Brothers 14 Mar 2010 10:30 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter xxx

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Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 11 Mar 2010 11:24 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    The tree-picking 'ceremony' was fun and I know that Harry was very moved by his personal ornament. It made him feel that much more a part of the Snape/Dumbledore family.

    Wedding attire was designed by a sadist, I believe. Terribly uncomfortable, but at least you don't have to wear it all that often and usually it looks very nice (bridesmaids are sometimes not so lucky). I'm sure that Harry and Severus look very handsome.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 11 Mar 2010 12:23 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great chapter, it is really showing how natural harry is becoming one of the family. Can/t wait to read about the wedding.

    Author's Response:

    Many parts of the wedding have been written by N.Forest. I didn't want to change them. I will announce it in front of the next chapter. But there is still around 85% of the next chapter that I have written. :)

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 11 Mar 2010 12:11 am
Reviewer: abby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Santa Claus does not have an "e"!

    Author's Response: Oh damn, I made the same mistake again. Sorry! I changed it!
Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 10 Mar 2010 11:43 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a quick update xxx

    Great chapter xx

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Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 10 Mar 2010 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. Watching the twins and Harry and his family get a tree, and then decorate it was a beautiful scene. It made me very happy. I am so glad that Harry is having such a great Christmas!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 70 – The Christmas Tree 10 Mar 2010 3:14 pm
Reviewer: ArcticSeasons (Signed) [Report This]
    This is the BEST chapter so far.

    I had to laugh at: Paul and his threat to have Harry sing a Christmas song; Eathan and Ly on how they got Harry out of bed; and finally Eathan at breakfast with trying to make it healthy so Santa would come that night. Ha! Ha! Ha!

    It was sweet to have the twins vote for Harry's tree, they're trying their best to give Harry a great Christmas.

    The best part of this chapter was when Harry got his own Christmas ball. It made him feel like he was finally part of the Snape family and the twins' big brother.

    Yeah, I'm with Harry, dressing up in clothes and shoes that make you uncomfortable sucks.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Bye!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, yes, uncomforatbel clothes suck and it will be horrible for Harry in the next chapter.

    Thank you very much for your help and the review! By the way I decided to get Kingsley more involved in Final Breeze 2 for you. I already wrote another chapter with him. :)


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